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Romance Created on 9-8-07 Views(4642) Story Rating G

Allie smiled then stood up really fast and started running from Nick and laughing.

"Hey! Come back here." Nick laughed.

He stood up and started chasing after her. Allie slowed down and looked behind her and saw Nick following her. She stopped to let him catch up. When he got close enough, he picked her up and started spinning around.

Allie laughed.

He stopped spinning around and kissed her. He put her down on the sand and hugged her. He held on to her hands and they started walking down the beach.

"Hey." Nick started.

"What?"

"You remember that shake thing we were in?"

She looked at him and slowly said, "Yea. Why?"

"No reason really." He answered.

Allie looked away from him and stared at the sand.

"Acctually.. I was kind of thinking maybe, you and I could go there later tonight." He finished.

"Oh."

"Where are we?" Nick asked.

Allie looked at him in a weird way and giggled, "We're at the beach silly, where do you think we are."

Nick just put a little grin on his face then went back to serious. "Allie, I mean.. where are we.. with us. This thing we have. What level are we at?"

Allie stopped walking and so did Nick. "What?"

Nick just looked down the beach not repeating himself.

"Nick."

"I just want to know where we are going. I know where I am. I'm at a part where I can feel like I can tell you anything or do anything with you, and know that I can trust you. But where are you at. What are your feelings towards me?"

"Are you saying I'm not showing you anything?" She asked.

"I don't know, Allie. I just care about you a lot. I need to know."

"Ok, well I like you a lot. I think I trust you. I mean you did save me from being raped.. two times. So I guess I'm at a part where I can be with you and say anything to you, and not care what you think."

Nick smiled.

"What's the next part going to be?" She asked curiously.

"Uhh, I don't know it depends, I mean.. I don't know." He said while letting go of her hand and rubbing the back of his neck.

Allie knew what he was thinking about. She knew why he brought up this conversation. "Are you thinking about something?" She asked him.

"Only you. Why?"

"I'm just wondering. What about me?"

"Allie, I don't know. Just you and me I guess." He said while starting to walk back to the tent.

"Nick.. please tell me what your thinking. Are you hiding something from me?"

"No." He said unsurely.

Allie followed him into the tent.

Nick layed down and covered the blanket over his head.

Allie sat down beside him. "Nick, please tell me."

"No."

"Why not?"

"Because."

"Because why?"

"I don't think you're ready. I don't think we're ready."

Allie didn't say anything after that. Because she knew exactly what he was talking about.

He took the blanket off his head and looked at Allie. "I don't want to move to fast."

"You're confusing me, Nick."

"I'm sorry. I hope you know what I'm talking about."

"I think I do."

Nick sat up and held her hand.

"I don't know if I'm ready though." She said.

"No, no no.. Allie it's okay to not be ready. I'm not gonna make you do anything. I would never to that."

She smiled then asked, "Are.. you ready?"

"Uhh, yea.. I am. But if I have to, I'll wait."

She smiled even more. "Have you ever done it before?"

Nick sat there for a few seconds looking at her. "Once."

"Oh. So you might know what you're doing?"

Nick grind. "Maybe."

Allie giggled and said, "I think I might be ready."

"Are you sure?" He asked while holding her other hand.

She nodded her head. "I think."

Nick smiled a little bit, "Come on."

"What?"

He crawled over to the entrance of the tent and Allie followed him.

"Nick, where are we going?"

"Into town."

"Why?"

Nick didn't answer and started running while holding her hand to the stairs the lead up to the road to town.

When they got there Allie buttoned up the the shirt all the way, then they crossed the road and ran to the sidewalk on the other side. They past a few shops. Allie looked behind her and saw that the sun was beggining to get blocked from some dark clouds.

"Nick?"

"Yea." He looked back at Allie a bit.

"I think it's going to rain."

Nick stopped and looked up at the sky. "Come on, we have to hurry."

"Where are we going?"

"You'll see." He said while smiling at her then walking faster.

Allie held onto Nick's hand tight. She looked around and there were only a few people walking on the streets, most of them were probably still sleeping.

All of a sudden she felt her self turn. She looked ahead of her and Nick had walked into a store. Allie followed close by. Nick went down many aisles. Then in the last row, he found what he was looking for.

"Nick." Allie said while looking at what he was holding in his hand.

"Are you sure you're ready?" He asked.

"Umm, I.." She stuttered

"Allie."

"I think."

Nick held onto her hand and walked quickly to the check out counter. He layed the box of condoms on the table. The woman behind the counter took the box and walked to the back room.

"Shit."

"What?" Allie asked.

"I don't have any money."

Allie giggled a little bit.

"Come on Allie, it's not funny." He said while laughing a little because he couldn't hold it back.

"What are we gonna do?" She asked.

"We can just take them when she puts them back on the counter."

"Nick."

"Well, do you have an idea?"

"Maybe." She said while smiling.

She started whispering stuff quickly into Nick's ear. A few minutes later the woman came back out of the room and sat the condoms on the counter then told them how much it was.

Allie walked over to a stack of cans on 'accidently' nocked them over.
"OH! I'm so sorry." She started picking them up slowly. "How clumsy of me."

The lady behind the counter quickly went over to Allie and helped, "It's okay."

Then Nick said, "Is it okay if I put the money in myself? It's going to start raining soon and we wanna leave before it's starts."

She turned around and looked at Nick. "Yea it's okay." Then told him the code to open it.

He opened it and acted like he put money in then quickly shut it.

Right after that they were finished stacking the cans back up.

"Allie come on, before it starts to rain."

Allie quickly walked over to Nick and held his hand and started walking towards the door.

The lady walked behind the counter then said, "Have a nice day."

Nick turned around, smiled, and said, "You too."

They walked out the door and Allie had the biggest smile on her face. They past 3 stores then started laughing.

"I can't beileve we got away with that." Allie laughed.

"Yea, I seriously thought we were gonna get caught."

Nick stopped smiling when Allie looked at the box of condoms.

"Come on." Nick said while holding her hand and heading towards the beach again.

They reached the stairs that went down to the sand. When they got half way in the middle of them, it started to sprinkle.

When they got to the bottom, they both started running down the beach until they made it to the tent.

Allie got there first and quickly went inside and Nick followed her in. Allie sat down on the far side of the tent with the blanket in her lap while Nick ziped the tent up.

Allie could hear thunder escape the sound of the rain.

Nick turned around after he got it ziped up and looked at Allie and smiled. She put a little grin on her face then went back to a serious one.

Nick scooted over to her and held her hands. "Are you ready?"

Allie nodded her head.

Nick moved closer to her and kissed her forehead. Then her cheek. He then put his hands on her face slowly and kissed her lips.

Nick felt Allie place her hand on his leg. He moved closer to her and broke the kiss apart then lifted Allie up and sat her in his lap.

She wrapped her legs around his waist then Nick started kissing her neck. She could hear the rain starting to pour down harder onto the tents sides, and the thunder get louder.

Nick stopped kissing her then reached over and grabbed one of the pillows and placed it to the left side of him. Allie got off of his lap and layed her head on the pillow.

He then reached over for the blanket and put it on his right side.

He put his hands on the each side of her and layed over top of her and started kissing her neck again. Allie layed her head back and relaxed.

Nick could hear Allie's breathing getting heavier and faster. He started kissing lower down to her colar bone. Allie put her hands on the back of Nick's neck then ran her fingers threw his brown hair that had gotten wet from the rain.

Nick placed his hand on Allies stomach then started kissing lower until he had to stop to take the shirt off of her.

He started moving his hand up her stomach closer to the buttons at the top of the shirt. He stopped when he reached her right breast. Her rubbed his hand over it gently then stopped and went for the first button.

He unbuttoned the first one quickly then the second one then the third. He took his time on the forth one. When he got the forth one undone, he stopped kissing her.

He hovered over her body. He looked down at the buttons and could see the beginning of her clevaige. He took his hand and unbuttoned the fifth one. He only had three more to go.

On the sixth one, he was starting to shake, but got it unbuttoned though. He started unbuttoning the seventh one, but Allie stopped him. He looked at her.

"What's wro.."

Before he could finish what he was saying, Allie quickly leaned up to him and kissed him. Nick kissed her back then put his hand back on her stomach then got the seventh button undone then quickly undid the last one.

He broke the kiss apart and looked down at her. Her breasts were revealed to him. Then suddenly Nick felt Allie pulling at his pants. He scooted over to another side of the tent and started taking them off. He looked over and Allie and she was taking her pants off too.

He smiled then grabbed the box of condoms. He opened it then took one out. He scooted over to Allie and started taking the wrapper off of it. He put it to the side. She layed her head back down on the pillow and watched Nick carefully.

He took his boxers off revealing himself to Allie. She watched as he unrolled the condom over his penis.

He moved closer to her and got over top of her again. He slowly started kissing her lips. He sliped his tongue inside her mouth. Brushing his across hers. He pulled away then started kissing her neck.

While doing this he moved his hand down her body to her panties. He placed his hand on the top of them and started pulling them down slowly. Allie lifted her body up to help. He put them to the side then started kissing her colar bone again.

He stopped kissing her then moved up higher. "Are you ready?"

She nodded her head and held onto his arm knowing that it would hurt her.

She looked up at Nick as he slowly pushed the head of his penis inside of her.

Allie gasped and held onto his arm tighter. He took himself out of her then slowly went back in, only a little deeper this time.

She held on tighter and tighter. He pulls his penis out again, and this time gently pushes back in all the way. Allie gasped again and layed her head back on the pillow and bit her lip.

"Are you okay?" Nick whispered.

Allie nodded her head and tried smiling but couldn't because it hurt so much.

Nick took himself in and out of her as slow as he could. He leaned down close next to her ear and whispered, "I love you, Allie." Then kissed her forehead. "I love you so much."

Allie put her hands around the back of his neck. Then Nick kissed her. They could both hear the rain pouring down on the tent. He took himself out of her and started giving her little kisses from her neck, then to her colar bone then down to her breasts. He stopped and put one of her breasts in his mouth and massaged her nipple with his tongue. He could hear little moans coming out of her hard breathing.

He placed his hand on her right thigh and started rubbing it. He made his way over to her other breasts and did the same as he did to the other. After he was finished, he gave her more little kisses down to her stomach. He moved his other hand up and masseged her left breasts. He felt her put her hand on top of his hand so he would know it was something that felt good.

Nick went lower until he came to her clit. He took his hand away from her breast and looked up at her. She was looking down at him wondering what he was going to do next. He looked away from her and kissed her clit.

He looked back at her and she had layed her head back down and relaxed. Nick spreaded her legs open wider so it would be easier. He moved his left hand up her stomach while kissing and sucking at her clit more and more.

He started massageing her right breast this time. Allie put one hand on top of his hand and her other hand on his arm.

Nick slipped his tongue deep inside her. Making her moan and breath harder.

He stopped massageing her breast and put his hand beside her to hold her hand.

"Ohh, Nick." He heard Allie call out.

He starting moving his tongue faster and faster inside of her.

He used his left hand to rub her left thigh. She was starting to moan louder and louder. Allie couldn't hold it back, she came. Her orgasim ripped threw her so hard and fast.

Nick licked it all up. He started kissing his way back up her body. He gave her little kisses up her stomach then kissed in between her breasts then up to her neck. Then finally reached her lips. It was still pouring down rain outside.

Nick stopped kissing her then rested his head on her chest. Allie relaxed too. She was still breathing hard from her orgasim. Nick was breathing fast and hard also.

"Nick.."

Nick looked up at Allie and found tears in her eyes.

He got off of her and sat up quickly. "What wrong?"

"We shouldn't have had sex."

"Why? It was so perfect, Allie. It was perfect." He said while whiping some tears away from her face.

"Nick."

"Why?"He asked agian.

"I don't know." She cried more.

Nick sat her up and hugged her as tight and gentle as he could. "It's okay, it wasn't wrong, Allie. It was a good thing. It was amazing. Please don't cry."

More tears just rolled down her face but Nick hugged her tighter.

"I love you, Allie."

A few minutes after he told her he loved her, she stopped crying and relaxed in his arms then feel asleep. Nick slowly layed her back down on the pillow and put the blanket over her.

He moved over to the other side of the tent and unrolled the condom off of his penis and put it in the wrapper it came in. He put his boxers back on and layed beside Allie and kissed her forehead.

 

 


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On August 17th 2008 CharmVxV01 Said :
CharmVxV01 wow, that's graphic! I think nick may have been wrong.
On July 25th 2008 LetMeFall Said :
LetMeFall it was a good story till now
On May 3rd 2008 MellyLikesPie Said :
MellyLikesPie shiit i had sex with a nick and my names allie i name it melinda cause i dont like melinda talk about sex
On April 26th 2008 quizgirlton Said :
quizgirlton Did you like have sex or something?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On April 3rd 2008 ilybaby06 Said :
ilybaby06 Aw that is so sweet! I wish my first time would have been like that.
On March 28th 2008 xXMzKekeXx Said :
xXMzKekeXx *tears* awwwww he loves her verry mch
On March 22nd 2008 SunkistLover21 Said :
SunkistLover21 awww i loved how he told her he loved her and it was ok, and if he hurt her. :] im only 14 and staying pure till marriage, but its fun to read stuffs like this xD
On March 19th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 i think your a great writer the more detail the better i think. you write well normally and sexually hahaa
On March 18th 2008 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic this is good. I never really felt like reading it before but when I finally got around to it its really good. Just in case you were wondering why I didnt want to read it, Its mainly because of the influence your so-called "Sweet Rapest" or whatever had on me. Bad choice of story on that one. Anyway, this is good.
On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx He really loves her a lot That's good beginning but in the end I don't really like and I had to keep reading until end yeah lol Love it
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess Omgoodness I love this story keep it coming
On January 3rd 2008 mknct4ever Said :
mknct4ever awww, I really luv ur stories...
On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said :
iluvballet12 OMG OMG OMG................ this is a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On November 21st 2007 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet i loved it plz keep me posted
On November 3rd 2007 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 i really like this part because it shows that he loves her and he doesn't want to hurt her. It is really sweet the way that you wrote this adn you didn't put as much detail as you do in "The best sex ever" i relaly like it and it is really really adorable!! please keep me posted!!
On November 1st 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces dude, you have to keep me posted, ok? just do it. and here's five MORE exclamation points for good luck. no, on second thought, i'll give you ten exclamation points for good luck. !!!!!!!!!! so now you HAVE to keep me posted. or else next time i'll give u 13 exclamation marks and then you'll have the worst of luck. no...wait...if i give you 18 exclamation marks it's the worst of luck...13 is only second to worst. but still...10 should definitely be considered deduperty luck!!!!! maybe next time...if it's good enough, which it will be like no-duh kind of good,...i'll give you 20, and that's extreme luck!!!! oh well...just keep me posted for crying out loud. you know, just don't be a bitch and keep us all waiting.
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 wow talk bout details
On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 oh wow that was very visual
On October 19th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 WOOOOOW that was very descriptive.lol my first time was a little like that lol exsept it wasnt in a tent and it was his first time too lol
On October 10th 2007 nickjonson Said :
nickjonson A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. Is all I can say...I HAVE NO OTHER WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW GREAT THIS THING IS!!!
On October 7th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 awwwww he really does love her!!!! :D
On September 15th 2007 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 awww he cares
On September 15th 2007 powersaw89 Said :
powersaw89 omg i love it i cant wait till the 15th one comes out!!!
On September 15th 2007 hippppoo101 Said :
hippppoo101 omgsh i love it this story keeps getting better and better ur a real great writer plz keep me posted!
On September 15th 2007 Crusty76 Said :
Crusty76 Thanks thats good keep me posted please