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"It's getting late, we should start heading back." Nick said while holding Allie's hands and helping her walk over to the door because it was so dark.
Nick finally reached the door and turned the handle and opened it. They both walked out of the shake. Allie looked up at the sky. The moon was as bright as ever. Nick looked back at Allie and he smiled. Allie looked at him and a smile appeared on her face.
"Where are we going?" Allie asked.
"I don't know. I don't think I'll be goin' back home for awhile. And your parents pretty much hate me already. I don't know where we're goin." Nick said as they got back on the sidewalk and started walking more.
Allie held his hand and walked closer beside him and rested her head on his arm.
Nick smiled and shivered a bit. He didn't have his shirt on because Allie was still wearing it.
Allie felt him shiver and said, "Nick, come on.. you're cold. You need you're shirt back."
"No, then you'll get cold." Nick said.
"Maybe, but I already have shirt on. It's not fair to you cause I have double the warmth and you have nothing." Allie said and stopped walking.
Nick stopped walking and said, "That's not true." Allie looked at him a weird way.
"I have you." Nick finished.
Allie smiled and said, "Oh, Nick." And started walking again.
Nick started walking too and the held her hand again.
"Hey I have an idea." Nick said while looking at Allie.
She looked at him and asked, "What is it?"
"Do you have a tent?" Nick asked her while smiling.
Allie laughed and said, "A tent?"
"Yep."
"Um, I don't know. If I do, it's probably in my garage some where." Allie said.
"Well alright, lets go get it. "Nick said.
At Allie's house outside
"Nick, this way." Allie said while walking to the side of her house and opening the garage door as quietly as she could. She walked in and Nick walked in right behind her.
She looked around, the darkness didn't make the process any easier. But eventually, they found a smallish sized tent. Nick carried it out of the garage and then Allie grabbed a flash light off the table then walked out and shut the door softly behind her.
Nick and Allie got in the middle of the road and started walking towards the beach.
They finally reached the steps that lead down to the sand. Allie shinned the flash light on the steps so they could see better.
"I like coming here." Nick said
"Why?" Allie asked.
"Ahh, it's just peaceful and relaxing. And I met you here."
Allie smiled then said, "Them are sort of the same reasons why I like coming here too."
Nick smiled.
When they got to the sand, they walked down the beach a little bit to get away from the steps and away from the road so the wouldn't hear cars or anything passing by them.
Nick put the tent down on the sand then started putting it together. Allie helped him a little but could only use one hand because she had the flash light in her other hand.
After they finished, Allie suddenly remembered something they should have gotten before they left her house.
"Nick." Allie said.
"Yea." Nick answered while fixing the inside of the tent.
"We forgot pillows and blankets." She said in a sad voice.
Nick got out of the tent. "No, don't worry. I'll go to my house and get some." He said while hugging Allie.
"Nick, your dad." Allie said.
"Don't worry, I'll be really fast and quiet. If he's there he won't even know I'm there." Nick said while kissing her then started walking.
"Nick, wait." Allie yelled. He turned around and saw that she was running towards him. She hugged him again.
"What was that for?" Nick asked while smiling.
"Just, be careful." Allie said while smiling too. "Here. She said while handing him the flash light.
"No, you need it more than I do." Nick said whild kissing her then walking away.
Allie went back to the tent and sat inside, looking out the opened part of it, waiting for Nick to come back.
Suddenly she hears something. It sounds like someone is walking in the sand very close to her.
She looked every where in front of her with the flash light, but didn't see anyone.
Then just as fast as the foot steps came, they were gone. She couldn't hear them anymore. She looked to her right with the flash light, but there was no one there. She turned the other way and a man pushed her back into the tent.
Allie dropped the flash light in the sand and started to scream. But the man covered her mouth. She tried to pushing him away but she wasn't strong enough.
The man started to try and take off Allie's clothes, but she got one hand free and slapt him in the head as hard as she could. He backed off a little bit and Allie sat up and tried getting out of the tent.
But the he pulled her back down and held her there and started sqweezing her breasts.
"Stop it!" Allie yelled. "Stop!"
The man slapt her across the face. Allie couldn't believe that this was happening to her. She could hardly breath. She tried pushing him away from her again but failed just like the first time.
"Help me!" She yelled hoping someone would hear her call.
But the man just quickly put his hand over her mouth again.
Then he tried unbuttoning her pants, but Allie bit his hand. He pulled it away then she yelled as loud as she could, "Help me!" She started kicking him and sat up again and wiggled her way out of the tent. She grabbed the flash light and started to run.
The man got out of the tent and started chasing after her. Allie ran as fast as she could. But he caught up with her and tackled her to the sand. She held onto the flash light really tight so maybe she would be able to see her attackers face.
But he held her hands down so she couldn't move them. He kissed her. Allie tried jerking away but couldn't. Then he started kissing her neck.
"Help me!" Allie yelled out as loud as she could again.
The man kept kissing lower and lower. When he got low enough, she kneed him in the face. He jerked away from her and she tried getting up but he held her down.
"Stop it!" She yelled. "Let me go!"
He started kissing her again and started to unbutten her pants once more. Allie yelled out again, "Help me!"
Then looked over to her right and saw someone running towards them.
He pulled the man off of Allie and started punching him over and over again in the gut.
Allie sat up and realized that it was Nick who was punching him. She was so scared, she had forgotten what she was doing before the man attacked her.
Nick got on top of him and started punching him in the face over and over and yelling at him, "You son of a bitch!"
"Nick." Allie yelled.
Nick stopped punching him and turned around to see Allie in tears.
"Allie, Throw me the flash light, I wanna' see who it is." Nick said while holding his hand out to catch it.
She threw the flash light and he caught it. Nick shinned it on Allie's attacker.
Nick got off of him and stood over him. The attackers nose was bleeding, and looked like he was getting a black eye.
Nick was breathing hard, he was tired. He looked back at Allie.
"Who is it." Allie asked while whiping her eyes.
Nick looked back at him and said, "No longer my friend."
Part 12 will be out soon
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OH! &, "No longer my friend", also means 'Mark'
Comments
| On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said : | |
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that guy Mark is wierd. -lia |
| On March 19th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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oh shit! no way |
| On March 8th 2008 cherry1997 Said : | |
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Cool story!! That Mark is really bad look at poor Allie!! Nick is really strong!! :-) |
| On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Mark is creeeppp! Wow.
Love this story! |
| On February 16th 2008 TwilightFan977 Said : | |
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omg omg omg i knew it!!! just the way he looked at her! ugh he disgusts me! GO NICK!!! Kick his sorry ass lol |
| On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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aaahhhhh!!!! What a creep. Poor Allie, I hope Nick hurt him good. |
| On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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i knew he was gon do dat then i was like naaaah but he did and now im so hooked on dis story!!!!onto da next one =] |
| On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said : | |
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wtf mark is a creep he's a jerk! ps i luv ur storys |
| On November 20th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said : | |
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very so hooked! |
| On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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wow mark was a horrible friend |
| On October 19th 2007 demonica666 Said : | |
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HA i know who it is lmao wooooooow thats gross |
| On October 16th 2007 emoxMCRx4ever Said : | |
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Mark scares me............. |
| On October 10th 2007 nickjonson Said : | |
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OMFG WHAT A FREAK!!! Ugh...reminds me of a weird dude at my school who stalks me, stares at me, and POPS ONE OFF TO ME DURING CLASS DX!!! EWW!!! Ugh...I feel like ripping his fucking head off (the kid, and mark) |
| On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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oh wow, mark is a creep!! |
| On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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OMG!!! i woulda killed him!! O_O |
