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"You wanna' go some where?" Nick asked Allie.
"But it's still raining. We'll get wet again." Allie answered.
"Ahh, come on Allie. So what if we get wet. Just live a little." Nick said while smiling and grabbing her hand and running out of her room and down the stairs with her.
Allie stopped Nick and said, "Wait, I have to tell my mom I'm going out."
Nick said, "Okay." And kissed her.
Allie smiled and quickly went in the dining room where her mom was.
"Mom?" Allie looked around then found her mother sitting at the table reading a book. "Mom." Allie said again.
Her mother looked away from her book and looked at Allie and said, "Yes?"
"I'm going to go out with Nick." Allie said then started to walking away.
"Hold on, Allie." Her mother said.
Allie stopped and turned around to see her mother walking towards her.
"Yes?" Allie asked, conserned to hear what she was going to say.
"Allie, he seems like a really nice.. boy. But.." Her mother started.
Allie quickly knew where she was going with this, "Mother.."
"No Allie, listen to me. I don't trust that boy. Your father told me what he saw when he went up to your room." Her mother continued.
"Mom, he was just showing me a bruise from.." Allie stopped speaking quickly.
"From?" Her mother asked eagerly.
Allie paused for a few seconds and tryed to think of something.. anything but the truth.
"Allie, a bruise from what?" Her mother asked again.
"A bruise from.." Allie started.
"Yes?" Her mother said wanting to hear what she was about to say.
"A fall." Allie finished.
"What?"
"A bruise from a fall." Allie said again.
Her mother looked at her in a weird way then said, "I still don't trust him. Just promise me that you'll keep an eye on him. If he hurts you in any way, tell my and your father, and we'll take care of it."
"Mom." Allie said while rolling her eyes. "I can handle myself. He's sweet, and he cares about me. He's not gonna' hurt me. Just trust me."
Her mother raised her voice and said, "I do trust you. I just don't trust him, Allie."
Allie backed away a little then said, "Well then you can trust that I know what I'm doing. I'll be back later." Then she turned away and left the room.
"Aye, you ready to go?" Nick asked while smiling.
Allie didn't smiled but said, "Yea, lets get out of here."
Nick stopped smiling and opened the front door and they both walked out. He stopped her from walking off the porch and said, "What's wrong?"
Allie turned around and said," Nothing, I'm fine, Everything's fine."
"Are you sure?" Nick asked.
Allie just nodded her head.
"Come on." Nick said while grabbing her hand.
They both walked down the sidewalk together. Neither of them knew where they were going. They were just walking, enjoying the moment while it lasted.
Suddenly, they both hear a male voice call out, "Nick!"
Nick turns around and so does Allie.
"Nick!" The voice calls out again.
Nick see's a guy running towards them both. He realizes that it's one of his good friends, Mark. Nick smiles a little.
"Dude, I thought you were on vacation still." Nick yelled back to him.
Mark finally reaches both of them and says, "I was, but we came back early."
"Oh, well this is Allie." Nick said, while smiling a smile he couldn't hold back.
"Well, nice to meet you Allie." Mark said while smiling at her.
Allie smiled and moved closer to Nick. She didn't know why, but she didn't feel safe when Mark was standing near her. She kept thinking what was causeing her to feel this way, but couldn't find the answer. She felt safe when she was closer to Nick though.
"So are you guys like.."Mark started.
"Yea." Nick answered before he got to finish.
Mark looked like he was about to say something to Allie but before he could his mother called from across the street to help her with something.
"Ahh, sorry guys a gotta' run, but I'll see you two around later." Mark said while walking away and looking at Allie in a weird sexual way. Nick didn't see it, he was looking at Mark's mom before he could look back at Mark to see his face.
When nick looked back Nick had his back to him. So Nick yelled, "See you later."
Mark turned around to just look at Nick for a second, then turned back around and walked faster.
Nick looked down at Allie. She had a worried look on her face.
"You okay?" Nick asked her.
Allie looked up at him and said, "Yea. Why?"
"I don't know. It's just you've been acting different ever since we left your house." Nick answered.
"Oh, well I'm okay." Allie said looking away from him.
"Are you sure?" Nick asked her again.
"Nick, I'm fine. Really, I am. I'm okay. Don't worry so much about me." Allie answered.
"Well I kinda' have to, and want to. I mean, I'm you're boyfriend. I wanna' know if you're okay and if you're not okay. And, I wanna' make it better if you're not." Nick said hoping to see a beautiful smile run across her face.
Allie smiled of course and said, " Oh. Well, I guess it's not okay."
"What do you mean? What's not okay?" Nick asked.
"I can't talk about it now. Can we just go some where. Some place that's, peaceful and relaxing?" Allie asked.
"Sure. But you should know that, I don't have a car yet. I'm saving up though. So I understand if you wanna' leave me for someone who has a car and can get you to places faster." He said then grinning.
Allie giggled then said, "Oh you don't have to worry about that, I like you just the way you are. With or without a car, you're perfect."
Nick smiled more then kissed her cheek.
He held her hand and they both started to walk up the side walk again.
Allie looked up at the sky and saw that it was getting darker and a little bit colder.
Nick put his arm around her to keep her as warm as he could.
"I wish I brought my jacket with me." Nick said.
"Why?" Allie asked walking closer beside him.
"Because I can tell you're freezing and I don't want you to freeze." He answered.
"Aww, I'm okay. I am a little cold but you're keeping me warm a little bit." She said.
"Well your shirt is a lot smaller than mine. So.." Nick stopped walking and unbutton his shirt.
"Nick.." Allie started. "You'll get really cold."
"Only a little." He said while taking off his shirt then putting it around her shoulders.
Allie smiled. Nick kissed her then said, "Now come on."
They started walking again and soon they were away from the town lights witch was almost a mile away.
"Aren't you cold, Nick?" Allie asked.
"Yea, but just.. a little. I'm okay though." He said in a shaky voice.
"Nick, you sound like you're freezing. Here." She said while starting to take his shirt off her shoulders. But Nick quickly stopped her and said, "Allie, I'm fine. I'm not that cold. I promise. Besides, there's a small shake over there." Nick pointed over to the shake that looked old but looked like it was strongly supported. "It might be warm in there, come on." He said while taking Allie over to it.
He let go of Allie's hand and walked over to the door of the shake. He knocked on it a few times to see if anyone lived in it. He waited a few seconds but heard nothing. He opened the door and looked inside it was dark, but here was a little light shinning in from the window.
Nick walked in and the floor was made of sand and some hay.
"Allie, come on. Come in here. It's okay." Nick said in a sweet and low voice.
Allie held Nick's shirt to her body as close as she could because the wind started to blow. She went inside the shake and stood close to Nick. He closed the door behind her and the room got a little darker.
"Allie? Where are you?" Nick asked while reaching his hands out to try and feel for her.
Suddenly he felt something. Allie felt him touch her right breast. She backed away quickly.
"Allie?" Nick asked again. "Was that you?"
Allie couldn't help but giggle a little. "Yes, that was me."
Nick laughed a little and then said, "Why'd you back away?"
Allie didn't say anything.
"Allie?" Nick asked again.
"Yea." She answered.
"Where are you?" He asked once more.
"I'm right here. Where are you?" Allie asked while giggleing a little more.
"Come on Allie, where are you?" Nick asked again.
"I'm right here." She answered back again.
"Go over by the window so I can see you then I'll come over to you." Nick said while looking over at the window waiting to see her appear in front of it.
"Okay." She said while slowly walking over to the window.
She waited to see Nick in front of her after that.
"Nick?" Allie said waiting to hear him answer back. But he didn't say anything. "Nick?" She said again. But he still didn't say anything. "Nick please say something, you're scaring me." Allie said in a voice that sounded like she was about to cry.
Then out of no where Nick came up behind her hugging her. She jumped and turned around quickly and hit him.
"Hey, what was that for." Nick said while backing away from her.
"You freakin' scared me, Nick." She said while crossing her arms and staying close to the window.
"Sorry." He said while moving closer to her again.
"Okay. Well, I'm sorry I hit you." Allie said.
Nick moved close enough to her so she could see him from the moon light that was shinning brightly threw the window now.
He but his hands around her waist and kissed her. Allie placed her hands on his chest gently, still remembering the brusie he had.
Nick moved his hands up to her face then gently moved his fingers threw her hair. He backed her up gently agains't the window.
Then he quickly stopped kissing her and turned his head to look behind himself at the door.
"What, what is it?" Allie asked him.
"Did you hear that?" Nick asked.
"Hear what?" Allie asked, starting to become worried and scared.
"I thought I heard something outside." Nick answered.
He looked back at Allie. She looked worried. "But it might have been the wind or something." He said, trying to unworry her.
Part 10 will be out soon.
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| On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said : | |
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this is a cute story. -lia |
| On April 21st 2008 quizgirlton Said : | |
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OMG!!! I love this!!!! |
| On March 17th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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awww this chapter made me smile and giggle |
| On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Man goood storyyy love it! |
| On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Man goood storyyy love it! |
| On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Man goood storyyy love it! |
| On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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awesome I cant wait to read the next one |
| On November 20th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said : | |
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curious, keep going... |
| On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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hmmm i wonder what it could be
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| On October 30th 2007 malaysianacces Said : | |
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u have ta keep moi posted cuz me likey |
| On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow it's a tad bit of a thriller |
| On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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this just keeps getting better and better!!! |
| On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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O_O LOVE IT! |
| On August 27th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said : | |
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i am happy they got some alone time;) i love it!! |
| On August 27th 2007 HaraKumiko Said : | |
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lols.. cute. ^^, |


