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"I'm just wondering, why don't you want anyone to know about what your dad is doing to you?" Allie finally asked.
Nick looked at her and said, "I don't know. I guess, it's just personal stuff. Stuff I can't trust other people with. I only told you everything cause I trust you and I like you. I like you a lot."
Allie smiled and said, "Oh."
Nick smiled and layed back on her bed and said, "Uhhh. I'm tired."
Allie smiled a little more and said, "Me too."
Nick laughed and pulled her back so she was laying beside him.
Allie laughed a little. Nick put his arm around her and pulled her closer to him.
"Your bed is comfortable." Nick said while turning over on his stomach, looking at Allie and smiling. Then he quickly rolled back over laying on his back holding his chest and saying, "Remind me not to ever lay like that again."
Allie giggled and asked, "Why?"
"My chest, it doesn't feel good when I lay on it, and I'm not a big fan of pain, so it would be good if I didn't lay on it, anymore.. for a while." Nick answered.
Allie got off the bed and went over to her door and shut it then walked back over and sat beside him. She smiled and said, "Let me see it."
Nick smiled and sat up and unbuttoned his shirt revealing his chest and the bruise his dad left on him.
Allie saw the bruise. She gently rubbed her hand over it. Nick flinch just a little. Allie moved her hand away quickly.
"No, it's okay." Nick said while smiling.
Allie smiled and moved her hand gently back over the bruise. She moved her hand to the side of it and looked at Nick. He was staring at her wondering what she was thinging about.
Allie quickly took her hand away from his chest. Nick smiled and said, "You're so cute."
Allie just giggled.
All of a sudden Allie's door opened. They both looked at the door and see Allie's dad. He looked at Nick in a very weird way. Nick looked at him and didn't know why he was being stared down like that. Then he realized his shirt was still unbuttoned.
He quickly stood up and buttoned it back. Allie stood up too and said, "Dad, this is Nick. Nick this is my dad."
Her dad looked at them both wondering what thet were doing before he came in.
"Daddy?" Allie asked, wondering why he wasn't saying anything.
"Nick, is it?" Her dad finally said.
Nick looked at him nerviously then said, "Yes sir."
Her dad looked him up and down, "I'll be keeping an eye on you." Then he walked out of the room, keeping the door open.
Allie looked at Nick for a few seconds then said, "I'm sorry."
"No, it's okay, I'm used to dads talking to me like that." Nick said.
"What?" Allie asked confused about what he just said.
"What?" Nick said.
"Are you comparing my dad to your's? Are you saying that my dad is like your dad?" Allie asked while stepping away from him a little bit.
"No, no no no no. No I didn't mean it to sound like that. It's just, well.. I don't know how it was supposed to sound, but it wasn't supposed to sound like that. I wasn't comparing anything. Okay?" Nick said while moving closer to her and holding her hands and making sure she forgave him for his mistake in his words.
Allie just looked at him. She knew by his face that he didn't mean what she thought he meant. So she just said, "Okay."
Nick hugged her and said, "I'm sorry."
Part 9 will be out soon.
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| On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said : | |
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love this story!! -lia
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| On April 21st 2008 quizgirlton Said : | |
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Are they gonna do it? |
| On March 17th 2008 hiphuney420 Said : | |
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this is awesome so far |
| On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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This is so good. I love it! |
| On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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OMgoodness, meeting the parents already. |
| On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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you got skillz though |
| On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said : | |
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awsome |
| On November 21st 2007 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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awosme job u should be a writer when u grow up |
| On October 30th 2007 malaysianacces Said : | |
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cute...but no offense or ne10, but it was quite boring...i mean i could have accidentally skipped this part and feel like i haven't missed out on anything that's worth knowing...but hey...i'll bet ya anythin that ur next parts/chapters will be awesome, and i guess this boring part is like nothing. it was something that passes my time so...yea. |
| On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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awww they are soo cute!!! |
| On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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loves it! |
| On October 10th 2007 nickjonson Said : | |
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kinda boring, but still, ITS UR WRITING!
NEVER EVER STOP WRITING! U CAN BE A GREAT WRITER SOME DAY!! if you EVER stop writing, I will hunt you down, put u in a room with only a pen and a pencil! lol |
| On October 8th 2007 cashy31196 Said : | |
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this part was kinda boring |
| On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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GREAT!!! |
| On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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i love it!O_O |


