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Romance Created on 8-19-07 Views(2000) Story Rating G

"I'm sorry." Nick said as he held Allie closer and closer to him. The rain was pouring down on them, harder than ever before. Allie just looked at him with tears in her eyes.

"Lets get out of here." Nick said while holding her hand and walking slowy away from his house.

"Are you okay." Allie asked him while watching him holding his chest.

"Yea, I'll be fine, I'm okay." He answered.

Allie put a little grin on her face. Nick wanted to smile but he couldn't. He wanted to go back to his house and hurt his dad more for hitting Allie.

"Nick.."  Allie started.

Nick looked at her ready to hear what else she had to say.

"We need to tell somebody about this." She continued.

Nick stopped walking and stopped her from walking and said, "Allie, no.. we can't tell anybody."

"Are you serious? Nick, he's hurting you, almost everyday. He's dangerous, if he hurt me, he could be hurting anyone else. Please, we have to tell someone." Allie said.

"No, I don't want anyone to know, but you. Okay?" Nick said.

"No, not okay. If you don't tell anyone, it could get worse and worse until it gets to the point where you're going to be in the hospitle."

"Allie, you promised that you would keep this between me and you. Please, just.. keep it that way. Please." Nick pleaded.

Allie looked into his eyes deeply trying to figure out why he didn't want anyone to know about what was going on.

"Please." Nick pleaded again.

"Okay." Allie finally gave in.

"Thank you." Nick said while hugging her.

"Lets go to my house and get out of this rain." Allie said.

Nick held her hand in agreement and they both started walking.

When they got there, they both went inside.

"Allie." Her mother said, shoked that she was drenched in water.

"Mom, I'm sorry it started to rain, and it took us awhile to get here." Allie explained.

Her mom looked away from her at Nick wondering who he was.

"Oh, sorry.. this is Nick. Nick this is my mom." Allie said.

"Oh well, it's nice to meet you Nick." Her mother said while smiling.

"Nice to meet you too." Nick said in return while smiling too.

"I'll be in the dining room if you need me." Her mother said while walking away.

Allie turned around and looked at Nick and asked, "Do you wanna' get dryed off?"

"Yea." He answered.

Allie grabbed his hand and took him up stairs to the bathroom.

"There's towels in here if you need them. I'll be in the other bathroom down stairs. When you're done just go to my room. Just go down the hall and make a right and I'll be back up here in a minute." Allie said.

"Okay." Nick said. Right before Allie got to walk away, Nick pulled her closer to him and kissed her. He pulled her in the bathroom and backed her up agains't the wall and held her waist and kissed her more and more.

Allie pulled away a little and said, "Okay."

Nick kept kissing her.

She pulled away again and said while giggleing a little, "Nick."

He started to kiss her neck.

"Nick." She said in a different voice than before. Nick knew that she really wanted him to stop, and that she wasn't ready for them kind of kisses yet.

"Sorry." Nick said.

Allie looked at him and put her hand on his chest wereing his dad hurt him before. She looked at it still wondering why he didn't want anyone to know what his dad was doing to him. She looked back at to find him looking at her.

She smiled and kissed his check then left the room. Nick closed the door and dryed himself as good as he could with the towels.

After he was down he opened the door and looked down the hall and remembered where Allie told him where her room was. He walked down the hall until he got to the end of it. To the right was a room. He went in. The walls were painted a really light clear blue. Her bead spread was different colors of blue too. He could tell that she was a big fan of the color.

"Hey, are you done?" Allie came in behind him and said.

Nick turned around and saw Allie smiling at him and then said, "Yea." While smiling back.

Allie walked around him and went over and sat on her bed. Nick smiled and walked over and sat beside her.

"I'm just wondering, why don't you want anyone to know about what your dad is doing to you?" Allie finally asked.

Nick looked at her and said..

 

Part 8 will be out soon.
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On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said :
LiaAmia this story just keeps on getting better & better! -lia
On April 21st 2008 quizgirlton Said :
quizgirlton Wow!!! I love this!!!
On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Mannn I lovee thisss!! =D
On February 16th 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 TOTAL CLIFF HANGER!! its almost torture! (THESE STORIES ARE BRILLIANT!!! KEEP AT IT!!!)
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess aaaahhhh you always leave me wanting to read more.
On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 wow your always leavin cliffhangers it kills me but i love them lol
On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said :
iluvballet12 this is fuckking great you should make a book and publish it.
On October 30th 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces aw man...yet another cliffhanger??? o well, the story was AH-mazing...and u HAVE to keep me posted!
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 aww man a cliff hanger stil good tho
On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 said what???
On October 10th 2007 nickjonson Said :
nickjonson U RULE SO MUCH!
On October 8th 2007 cashy31196 Said :
cashy31196 wut does she say?!
On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 luuuuv it!!
On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said :
lilprincess122 O_O i love love love it!
On August 27th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said :
Hudsonluv44 i like this one alot too, im about to read the next one you got alot of them done in a short time..