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Romance Created on 8-18-07 Views(2361) Story Rating G

Nick took Allie back to his house because Allie's house was farther away from the beach.

They ran to Nick's porch to get out of the rain. Nick tried opening the front door but it was locked.

"Shit." Nick said.

Allie looked at him then said, "What's wrong?"

"The doors lock."

"Well, what are we gonna' do now?" Allie asked.

"We could probably get in from my window." Nick said while grabbing Allie's hand and running around to the back of the house. He opened the gate and walked in. Allie followed him and shut the gate behind her.

Nick took Allie over to his bedroom window. It was pretty high up. So he had to open it first then grab onto the edges and pull himself in.

It was easy for him to open it, but it took him a few trys to get inside. After he got into his room, he put his hands out the window. Allie took hold of them and Nick started to lift her up. He was useing almost all of his strength. Then Allie flew inside his room and landed ontop of him.

Allie started laughing. Nick was smiling then joked and said, "Ow."

"I'm sorry. But you pulled to hard." Allie said while getting off of him and sitting beside him.

"Aww, come on. Why'd you get off?" Nick said while smiling and looking up at her.

Allie just smiled and leaned down and kissed him. She was about to pull away, but Nick started to kiss her even more. He pulled her back ontop of him and kissed her more and more.

Nick stopped kissing her then sat up agains't his bed. He pulled her closer to him and kissed her again. He then started kissing her neck.

Allie pulled away and said, "Nick."

"What's wrong?" He asked.

"To fast." She said while resting her forehead on his.

"I'm sorry." Nick said.

Allie smiled then Nick kissed her once more.

Suddenly, they heard a door open down stairs then slam shut.

Nick and Allie jumped. He looked at Allie with a worried face.

"My dad." Nick said.

 Allie got off of him and they both stood up fast. "You gotta' hide." Nick said in a scared voice. "I think he's drunk again." He added.

"No, he'll hurt you." Allie said. while holding his hands.

"Allie, if he knows your here, he might hurt you too. Please just hide in my closet, hurry." Nick pleaded while trying to walk her to his closet.

"No." Allie said while pulling away to the other side of the room out of his reach.

Then, Nicks door opened fast. They both looked at his dad and stood still.

"What's this bitch doing here.?" His dad said to Nick in an angry voice.

Nick knew he was drunk. "Don't call her that." Nick said back to him.

Then his dad got closer to him then slapped him. Allie gasped and put her hands over her mouth. Then his dad went over to her to slap her.

Allie closed her eyes. Nick grabbed his dad's hand and said, "No." and pushed him up agains't the wall, and then he feel to the floor.

"Allie get out of here, hurry." Nick yelled.

"No, I'm not gonna' to leave you here." She said back.

His dad stood up then grabbed Nick and punched him in the face. Allie gasped again and yelled, "Stop it!" Then ran over to his dad and started hitting and clawing at his back.

He turned around and slapped her and she feel to the floor holding her cheek. Nick got up and saw what had happened and started hitting his dad over and over in the face.

"Allie get out of here!" Nick yelled and pleaded again.

Allie looked up at Nick hitting his dad. She stood up and ran out of his room, down the stairs, and out the door.

She stood in his yard in the pouring rain. She started to cry and yelled, "Nick!"

Nick pushed his dad up agains't the wall and kicked him 5 times and warned him, "Don't you ever touch her again." Then he rushed out of his room, down the stairs, and out the door and saw Allie standing in his yard with her hands on her head crying.

He ran to her and hugged her and said, "I'm so sorry Allie." then held her tighter and tighter.

 

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On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said :
LiaAmia if i were Nick i would kill my dad, then gather my stuff and stay @ Allie's house. -lia
On May 10th 2008 Jorshuan Said :
Jorshuan thats y I hate beer
On April 21st 2008 quizgirlton Said :
quizgirlton OMG!!! His dad's such a mean guy!!! I hate him!!
On March 22nd 2008 SunkistLover21 Said :
SunkistLover21 OMG! His dad sucks monkey balls. I'm glad my parents arent abusive :] This is a great story.
On March 17th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 im hooked this is great
On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wowww, that's best part of story that addict me haha love it
On February 9th 2008 kidsayuki Said :
kidsayuki gay and pathetic story so poorly written sorry this has hit the extremes. of shit.
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess dang it only gets better and better
On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 omfg dis is da best lol
On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said :
iluvballet12 soooo sad it made me cry but i liked it. but why the hell did he slap her if i was nick i would run away!
On November 28th 2007 punkgurl989 Said :
my picture
aawww how sweet
On October 30th 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces wow...nick is really sweet to stand up to his dad for his girlfriend's sake...so sweet!
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 awww he is so nice to her
On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Short but catchy
On October 19th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tats what i call love lmao lol the rest of the stuff i thought was corny sry to say but i still love it.
On October 10th 2007 nickjonson Said :
nickjonson agjvaiowjgnaogjnakljgjawkj;o!!!AAAAA!!!! I DUN EVEN NO WAT O SAY!!! GAAAASSPP!!! IT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY (lol, classic drunk dad, I used to use it ALL the time...I still do lmao)
On October 8th 2007 cashy31196 Said :
cashy31196 omg!
On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 i hate his dad!!! but i luv the story!!
On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said :
lilprincess122 AWWW ='( O_O
On September 3rd 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :
qosdfyjvwefayv omg that made me cry for real! ive neva read a story that made me cry b4 wow!
On August 27th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said :
Hudsonluv44 omg that is so good, i got goose bumps, i cant wait to read the next one
On August 26th 2007 lilangelofgod Said :
lilangelofgod omg i cant wait to go read 7 his dad is a big asshole
On August 26th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro the descriptive flow of these stories is generally pretty good,but I can't help but feel they could be improved if you could leave some things to imagination rather than describing every detail of what each person is doing or even focusing more on a character's intentions than on each specific action. for example, rather than saying "he punched him in the gut 5 times", you could focus more on the intentions and emotions by saying "his pulse raced as his fists landed hit after hit, in hopes of subdueing his attacker and sparing his new young love the pain he had endured for years"
On August 20th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole jesus christ mary and joeseph and all the frickin apostlesss!!!!!!!!!! woahh i love thisss keep me posteddd =]
On August 19th 2007 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 oh my god..he had no right to slap her