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Romance Created on 8-11-07 Views(2351) Story Rating G

Nick let go of Allie and layed on the sand and closed his eyes. Allie layed down beside him and held his hand. Nick opened his eyes and felt all warm inside.

He hated the fact that the clouds were moving so slow, but the moment was moveing by so fast. He wanted Allie to lay beside him and hold his hand forever.

Nick closed his eyes again and felt the wind hit his face. He sat up and let go of Allie's hand. Allie sat up and asked, "What's wrong?"

Nick looked at her and smiled and put his hand on the side of her face and said, "Nothing."

Allie smiled and looked up at the sky. The clouds were in dark shades. The wind started to blow harder and faster. They could hear little bits of thunder escapeing the sound of the wind.

Allie looked back at Nick and said, "It's going to rain." Nick just kept looking up at the clouds.

"Nick, it's going to rain." Allie said again while holding onto the his arm. Nick held her hand and looked at her and said, "I know, isn't it great?" Allie laughed and said, "Only if you want to get struck by lightning."

"It's not lightning." Nick said while looking back at the sky. Then he saw a bolt of lightning strick but not reaching the earth just yet.

He looked back at Allie. She had a grin on her face then said, "Come on." While running away from him.

Nick started running after her. It seemed the faster they ran, the thunder got louder. Allie was smiling the entire time.

Nick felt little sprinkles of rain hit his face. Allie slowed down and looked back at Nick. He slowed down too and caught up with her.

Then he put both of his hands on her face and kissed her. It started to rain harder and harder. Nick picked her up and started kissing her more and more.

Allie pulled away from him. Nick looked at her. She was smiling. Then she hugged him. Nick hugged her back tight and started spinning around in circles with her.

Allie was laughing. Nick stopped hugging her then kissed her again. Then put her back down on the sand. Allie grabbed his hand and then they both ran to the lockers to get there clothes.

When they got there, they both stopped running. Allie leaned agains't the lockers to catch her breath. Nick sat on the ground to catch his breath too.

Then Allie went to the locker that she put the clothes in. She opened it and got her shorts and Nick's shirt. She walked over to Nick and threw his shirt on his head.

Nick took it off his head and smiled. Allie put her shorts on then sat down beside him.

Nick looked at Allie and said, "We should be headin' back before it starts to rain any harder." Then Allie said, "Okay."

Nick stood up then took Allie's hand to help her up. He pulled her closer and kissed her again before they got back out in the rain.

Allie put her hands on his face. Nick put his hands on her waist and pushed her back gently agains't the lockers.

Allie took her hands off his face. Nick stopped kissing her and said, "Sorry." Allie looked at him while smiling and said, "Come on."

Nick held her hand and they went back out into the rain. They went around the locker building then ran to the road. When they got to it, they ran across it.

It started to rain harder. The road almost looked like it was being flooded by the water. But they couldn't tell because it was raining so hard.

 


Sorry it took so long. My life hasn't been that good to me. I didn't have the time to write much. But I'll write part 6 later. Rate and Comment. Thanks!

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On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said :
LiaAmia i absolutely love this story!!! -lia
On April 20th 2008 quizgirlton Said :
quizgirlton Wow! Pretty good!
On February 29th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx It is very interesting! =D love it
On February 26th 2008 livingxliife91 Said :
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this sotry is like ADDICTING
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess I am fully addicted to your story, keep it coming.
On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 this gets cuter everytime lol onto 6
On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said :
iluvballet12 this is awsome i cant stop reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On November 20th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said :
7countrygirl7 WIcked, It's getting more interesting!
On October 30th 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces aww...the more you write, the more i want to read it, so you betta be writing more real soon, cuz i hate it when i get to a super good part in a story and then it's like...huh?no more? well...anyways, you just HAVE to let me know when part 6 is coming up, ok? it's just that gud!!^_^
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 awww so cute
On October 6th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 :3 LOOOOOVE IT!!!
On September 10th 2007 lilprincess122 Said :
lilprincess122 AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I LOVE IT!! O_O
On August 20th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
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On August 16th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said :
Hudsonluv44 gosh this is getting really good, message me when you have part 6 written please!! I love this story...
On August 15th 2007 LovewitJohnny Said :
LovewitJohnny keep me posted..i like this story ^_^It is very good