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I'm so sorry that it took so long to get this one out, but I have tried writing this 3rd part for the longest time, but everytime I posted it, it got messed up and everything got erased. But anyway, here it is. I hope you like it and I hope it is worth the wait that I put you threw. Again, very sorry!
Nick said, "Would it be horrible if I asked you out.. oh say maybe for Saturday?" Allie looked at him and said, "No, it wouldn't be horrible." Nick just looked at her and smiled and said, "Well alright!" in a funny voice. Allie giggled a little. Then Nick asked, "So you wouldn't get scared and run away from me if I asked you out on a date?" Then Allie said, "No, I probably wouldn't." Then Nick looked at her for a second then said, "Probably? So you're telling me that you might get scared and you might not?" Then Allie said, "Probably." Then Nick looked at her and smiled.
"Can I tell you something?" Nick asked her. Allie looked up at him and said, "Sure." Then Nick stopped walking and so did Allie. Then he took a deep breathe and said, "I like you. I like you a lot, actually." Allie looked at him and smiled a little. Then Nick added, "When I first saw you today, I thought, ya know.. WOW! I never thought a girl could get as beautiful as you." Allie smiled and blushed. Nick smiled and then said, "I'm glad I feel down today and hurt my head." Allie looked at him laughing then asked, "Why would you be proud of something like that?" Then Nick said proudly, "Because if I didn't, I would have ever gathered enough courage to walk over to you and say something. And we both know that you wouldn't have came over to me if I didn't fall." Allie laughed a little more and said, "Well, then I guess I'm kinda glad you feel today too." Nick smiled and reached for her hand and held it.
Allie smiled. Then Nick just looked at her and got closer. Allie quickly stopped smiling, for she knew what was about to happen. Nick got even closer. Allie didn't know what to do. She panicked and backed away a little bit. Nick looked at her and asked, "What's wrong?" Allie looked at him frightened and very quickly said, "Nothing." Nick just looked at her. He knew why she backed away from him. He knew she knew that he was wanting to kiss her. So he desided not to try again, he didn't want to scare her away. So he took her hand again and started walking.
Then Nick couldn't take it anymore. He just had to ask her, "What are you so afraid of?" Allie looked at him and said, "What?" Then Nick said, "Why are you so scared?" Allie looked at him in the weirdest way then said, "Because, that's just the way I am, it's just me. Ya know, I've learned that it takes years to build up trust, but only seconds to destroy it. That's why I'm so afraid."
Nick looked at her then didn't say anything for awhile. Then he finally gathered up something in his head to say, "Well, the truth is, everyone is going to hurt you in some way, okay, you just have to figure out who's worth the pain. And I'm kinda really hopeing, I'm the one that's worth it. Even though I'll try my best not to cause it." Allie looked at him and smiled a little and said, "That's sweet." Then Nick said, "Well it was supposed to be." and smiled. Then Allie smiled more. Then Nick said, "You can't discover new oceans unless you have the courage to lose sight of the shore." Allie looked at him and new exactly what he was saying and then she said, "Yea, well that's just it, I just don't have the courage to." Nick looked at her then said, "Maybe you'll have the courage if I'm out there with you." Allie smiled.
"So I might ask you something.. but you gotta promise not to get scared or anything. Oh and you can't say no." Allie laughed then said, "Okay, ask me." Nick stopped walking again and so did Allie. Nick looked at her while holding her hand then asked, "Will you go out on a date with me tomorrow?" Allie looked at him for awhile smiling then said, "Okay." Then Nick said in amazment, "Really?!?!?" Allie smiled and said, "Yea." Then Nick got close to her and hugged her tight while smiling the entire time. Allie couldn't stop smiling too. Then the hug finally ended of what seemed like it went on for the longest time. Then Nick looked at Allie and smiled. Allie smiled back.
Then Allie looked at the sun that was almost out a view. Nick turned around to see what she was looking at then he asked, " You wanna leave before it gets dark?" Allie looked away from the sun then looked at Nick and said, "Yea." Then Nick held Allie's hand and walked her over to some steps that lead up to the road. When they got to the top, Nick asked, "So you want me to walk you home?" Allie then said, "Sure." Then Nick said, "Good, but even if you said no, I would have walked you home anyway." Then Allie said, "Oh really?" Then Nick said, "Yep, I wouldn't want anything to happen to you. Allie just smiled.
Then Allie saw that they were very close to her house, she thought about what might happen when they both got there. Only one thing was running threw her head. Then Allie snaped out of her thoughts and saw that they were at her house. Nick walked her up to her door step. When they got there, they faced each other wondering what might happen. Allie looked at him and said, "So this is me." while looking at her house. Then Nick got closer to her. Allie didn't know what to do again. He got so close she got scared and closed her eyes, and then something amazing happened...
Part 4 will be out soon, I promise. I hoped you liked this one. Rate and Comment please!!!! :]
Comments
| On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said : | |
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best ever!:]
-lia
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| On April 20th 2008 quizgirlton Said : | |
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This is great! |
| On April 5th 2008 RaiLynn Said : | |
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DUDE THIS IS YOUR BEST STORY |
| On February 29th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Love it!
Very cute! |
| On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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Yay, this is a great story. |
| On January 1st 2008 themisskayla Said : | |
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aww thats sweet |
| On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said : | |
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i like your stories they're not too short but not too long lol on to da next one i go |
| On November 30th 2007 iluvballet12 Said : | |
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i luv it ... soooooooooooooooo romantic do they kiss tell me!!!!!!!!!! LOL |
| On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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soo good
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| On October 29th 2007 malaysianacces Said : | |
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cool...but really...all they really do is just smile at each other |
| On October 27th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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hmmm...keepme posteed |
| On October 13th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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Typical plot. I read the 18th part first, and it's good to see you've improved your writing. Because quite frankly these first several parts seem to be too "basic". Not enough description to get a clear head. They walk, smile, say something, walk, smile. I didn't like this. But I'm glad you're improving =] |
| On October 8th 2007 cashy31196 Said : | |
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wuts gonna happen next! |
| On October 5th 2007 wannahug13 Said : | |
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yay!!! its great!! |
| On September 16th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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AMAZING
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