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Romance Created on 6-13-07 Views(3840) Story Rating G

Nick looked at Allie and asked, "Well, uhh do you... umm trust me?" Allie said, "No, I actually don't." "I kind of figured that would be your answer, mostly because we just met right?" Nick said. "Yea, mostly because of that." Allie said. "So have you ever trusted anyone before?" Nick asked. Allie looked at him for a second then said, "No." "Wow. So your whole life you've never had to count on anyone.. you've been independent, the whole time?" Nick asked. "Yea pretty much my whole life." Allie answered. "Do you think you could ever trust me?" Nick asked. "You have a lot of questions, don't you." Allie said while giggleing. "Okay, yea I know I'm sorry for asking so many things.. but you can't blame a guy for being a little curies can you." Nick said. "No I guess not." Allie said.

"But really.. do you think you could ever actually really trust me?" Nick asked again. "I don't know. There might be a good possibility. You never know." Allie answered. "Yea I guess. So will you walk with me on the beach?" Nick asked. Allie looked at him and smiled. "Come on you know you want to." Nick said while smiling back. "Okay." Allie agreed. They started to walk down the sandy beach. Nick couldn't stop looking at her. He thought she was just flat out gorgeous. He loved the way her brown hair flew across her face when the wind blew. He finally looked away from her and looked at the ocean water. The big waves were starting to get closer to shore. But he realized he left his board back where he fell. He wouldn't get in the water and leave Allie. He wanted to stay with her. He started to stare at her again. Then out of no where he smiled. Then Allie looked at him and smiled because he was smiling.

"Um.. I should be heading home. My parents don't know I left." Allie said. Nick looked at her wishing she didn't say it but he asked, "Okay.. want me to walk you?" Allie started walking away and then said, "No I'll be fine." Then Nick said, "Well I guess I'll see you around." Allie looked back and said, "Yea I guess we will." Then Nick ran after her and then said, "Listen, uhh.." Allie looked at him. "I'm gonna be here around like 2 hours before sun set, and ya know maybe if you want.. you could come back down here." Nick said hopeing for a yes. "Okay, I'll be back down here before sun set." Allie said. Nick smiled and said, "Okay well.. I'll be right here waiting for you." Allie smiled and said, "Okay, I'll see you then." All Nick could think after that was kissing her. What I would be like. Then she started to walk away again. He watched her untill he couldn't see her anymore.

Then he started walking back to his board. When he got to it, he looked out at the water and the waves were perfect. But all he could really think about was Allie's beautiful smile and her wonderful hazel eyes. So he picked up his board and went home. When he got there, he ran up stairs and took a shower. Then he went in his room and looked out his window and saw that it was still a sunny day. He put a long sleaved shirt, a jacket, and shorts on. He wanted to look his best. He had nothing to do. Had nothing planned but to walk on the beach with Allie and watch the sun set. So he watched TV till it was almost sun set.

2 HOURS BEFORE SUN SET

Nick looked out his window and saw that the sun was about to start setting. He left his room, ran down stairs and went out the front door. He was so exicted to see Allie again. He was smiling the whole way to the beach... and he didn't even know it. When he got there, he went to the spot he told Allie that he would be at waiting for her. He looked around and there was only a few couples there. He looked back and there she was. He put the biggest smile on his face. He started walking towards her and when he got close enough he said, "Hey!" Allie looked at him and said, "Hi." While smiling. She was wearing shorts and a short sleaved shirt. The only thing that was running threw his head was how hot and how beautiful she was.

Allie put her arm threw his and got close to him. Nick looked at her and smiled and asked, "Are you cold?" Allie looked up at him and said, Yea, just a little." Then Nick took his jacket off and put it over her shoulders and then she put her arm threw his again. She smelled his jacket and smiled and said, "You smell very good." Nick smile and said, "Why thanks, I try to smell my best." Allie smiled and giggled a little. "So tell me.. do you trust me now?" Nick asked. "Allie looked up at him and said, "No.. not yet." Nick then said, "Aww come one, I'm like totally adorable. You can't just stand there and say that. Allie started laughing and said, "Okay, fine.. I guess I trust you just a little. But only a little." Nick said while smiling, "Okay then, that's better. Would it be horrible if I asked you out.. oh say maybe for Saturday?" Allie looked at him and said..

 

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On June 11th 2008 HeathaJo Said :
HeathaJo that is soo cool.
On June 4th 2008 LiaAmia Said :
LiaAmia i thinkit was amazing. -lia
On May 10th 2008 Jorshuan Said :
Jorshuan wtf... how can you people leave us like this?! I hate when idk what happened... anyway good job
On April 20th 2008 quizgirlton Said :
quizgirlton I think these books are like totally awsome. They're sooo romantic and you're such a great writer!
On April 8th 2008 Shadow1323 Said :
Shadow1323 IT'S TORTURE! :P jk jk
On March 31st 2008 xxpunkchik89xx Said :
xxpunkchik89xx yay great story!!!! cant wait for da 3rd one!!!!
On March 24th 2008 docteRight Said :
docteRight This is good. But ive read better stories than this.
On March 24th 2008 JeremyIsWhiped Said :
JeremyIsWhiped its alright i guess. your a good writer though. I realy lke your sex storys a lot.
On March 24th 2008 DrunkenProblem Said :
DrunkenProblem good
On March 10th 2008 milkduds757 Said :
milkduds757 i love untrusted love i read all of the chapter your great!! if u have a myspace that will be mad chyll.ez will if u do my e mail is xxtherealkidxx@yahoo.com - && milkduds757@yahoo.com or aim me milkdudz55 kk thanxx && i love your bools
On March 8th 2008 cherry1997 Said :
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How sweet they watched the sunset together!! Loving this story!!!8-]
On February 29th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Love it! I love when he acts so sweet lol ♥
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess Way cute...he seems very sweet, reading on...
On January 13th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 I like it when they were just beginning to know each other. It was so innocent. It think now that he is asking her to marry him on Prom it is really sweet. I like it! kmp!
On January 1st 2008 themisskayla Said :
themisskayla thats awesome
On December 29th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 wow cliffhanger lol i like it so far
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 still really good
On October 29th 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces o MY GOD! how could u just end it like that- and torture all your poor innocent readers who want nothing more than your AWESOME story? lol...just kidding...but seriously...u totally need to start part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On October 27th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 i love it
On October 5th 2007 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 weeeee its great!!
On July 6th 2007 Brandi8760 Said :
Brandi8760 YES! I loved this one, but GOSH! Why do you have to end it like that? lol I'm reading the next one. I love this story!!!!!
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On June 29th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 how rude leaving all of us hanging like that lol write more please you are such a good writer
On June 28th 2007 hellshelper Said :
hellshelper cmon write more does she yes or no?!?!?!?!?!
On June 26th 2007 krystalcook Said :
krystalcook duz she say yes or no?!?!?!?!a gurl needs 2 kno these things!!lol!! write part 3!!!