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Tragedy Created on 3-22-08 Views(31) Story Rating G

My head was ringing. It hurt so much. I looked to my side Josh was there, 'Thank God.' I thought. That was before I saw how slightly he was breathing. "Help! Help me please!" I began to yell. I saw my friend Cherri walking past, I hammered on the window. "Oh God! Meg? Are you and Josh o.k.?" She asked,                                                         "I'm o.k. but Josh is hardly breathing!" I cried in reply. I got out of the car. Cherri and I pulled Josh out of the car, slowly. An instincit told me to check his pulse. But there wasn't a pulse to check! I began CPR while Cherri called for an ambulance.

The ambulance finally arrived. I just got Josh's pulse back. I guess those stupid first aid lessons weren't so pointless. Josh looked so pale... Cherri and I climbed into the ambulance after Josh was put in.

Tell me what level you'd give this. 'Cos my teachers are saying I'm under-achiving. But I'm getting 5a's. At the end of yr9 I should be getting 7a's. AAnyway level & vote. thanx. Part 4 comin' soon.

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On May 27th 2008 becca277 Said :
becca277 nice
On March 26th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Well, more details would be nice! But kmp