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Tragedy Created on 3-19-08 Views(39) Story Rating G

I cluched the knife in my hand. I dared myself to do it. After about half an hour, I did it. I dug deep into my wrist. I did it, Josh this is my...... Then everything went black..

I woke-up in the hospital. I thought I ended my suffering, I guess I was wrong. "Your family are here to see you." my doctor told me, "I'm too tired. I don't wanna see them." But you know how doctors are he let them in anyway. It wasn't that bad, it was Mum, Dad, Chad (older bro) & Kari (older sis). When everyone left and it was just me and Chad he made me tell him why I did it.  So I had to, I just couldn't lie to him.

Later Chad went to see Josh. He hit him, again and again. I know I was discharged. Chad said "I need to make one quick stop" I secretly followed him. I heard Josh crying out with each blow. I began to cry, I loved my brother. "STOP IT!" I cried as i knelt down by Josh. Chad's experession went from anger to regret. He sprinted out of the house. I couldn't hear a car, I knew I couldget home that way. I helped Josh to his feet, I put him in the car. I looked in the trunk. I... I saw Katelin's body, her scared face.... She wasn't wearing any clothes.... There was a wire tied around her neck.... Oh my God Chad what have you done? I closed the trunk and ran into the car. I began to drive to the hospital. I saw a shadowy figure on the roof of a building. They had gun! It shot me in the hand. I lost control of the car. We swerved into a wall. Everything want black again....... Chad you basta.......

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On May 27th 2008 becca277 Said :
becca277 slow down everythign went way to fast u could barly understand but it was good
On March 26th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter A little confusing; slow it down a bit, don't be afraid to add details, and once you do you'll make more paragraphs