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How one person can make a big diference3
Drama
 Created on 8-13-07
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My body was so tore . I could barley walk without whimpering in the dark pool of my misery and pain.The soft tinkering of my chain slightly echoed in the quiet hall .I would again be late to my next class because i could barley command my body to move any further. I was very tempted to lay down in the hall where i stood .But i couldn't that would only draw further attention to me. The linoleum floor was so shiny and slick my feet where practically sliding on their own .The soft pitter patter of feet was heard before the loud crown in the lunch room was .I thought to give up and just go sit by the door of my next block but what would be the point there if i sat down i would not be able to get back up. I sighed deeply my eyes beginning to sting and water beginning to fill my eyes .No! i said to myself you cant break down now it is not over yet .Somehow i made it to my next block without one person saying anything to me about why i was whimpering with every step i took. Walking in i never looked up the only sound in the room was the soft jingle of my chains and harsh dragging sound of my feet as i made me way to the seat i had been given .That telling me i was the only one there and there was no reason to look around and see the faces who haunted my dreams . Sliding into a seat i caught my breath my heart was pounding so hard i wanted to cry to let it all out but to who?There was no one to listen.No one to care .To many i am sure my words where just thin air. After a long time had passed i heard the long loud thrum of the bell again knowing in a flash it was time to face my fears again.Why did life have to be an on going battle of love war and hate?The room slowly filled with people i heard a few people giggle and whispering as the walked by me.It was nothing new .One by one the class filled at it was time to start class .I moved slightly in my chair so at least i was in the direction of my desk causing a bit of noise i could feel my teachers cold stare . I glanced up looking not at her but looking at something in the distance so i would not look her in the eyes.she was looking at me .She looked to be aggravated at my disturbance and sighed softly unable to yell at me for a 8th time this week."Further more class we have a few things before the week end .Girl you know your projects you need to make a diagram of how a baby is born .Guy! you know your project write a paragraph on how the process is done do i make myself clear?"She asked her voice shrill as it sounded through the large room of pupils. I was going to raise my hand to ask if we could print it out from the computer but i know she would look at me like i was stupid and just continue talking as if i did not say anything at all . So i saved her the trouble and sat in silence . A moved again this time i had to put a hand over my mouth not whimper loud in pain as it felt like a shard of broken glass ripped through my ribs and back all at once the pain doubling in a New York second.Tear's welled up in my blue eyes . No more then 15 minutes and i would be on my way home .For that 15 minutes of pain it all i could think about was how much i hated my life how much i wish it would end how much i wish i was strong enough to slice that blade a little further then just an inch. The bell rang loud and long the where a loud crowed that had already began leaving .The shuffle of books ,the pitter patter of feet running or just slowly walking with friends.Then there was me the girl who walked alone in pain and wearing my broken heart like a road sign. The loud crowd was like a sea of people ..running down the same hall as me yet .I felt all alone like i was the only one there that could see me. I found my way down the hall and to the bus getting on i knew it was not the end of my troubles the entire bus was full including my seat a walked to the very last seat and looked at the black girl sitting in my seat .
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Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said : | |
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What a terrible way for ppl to treat you, you'd think at least one person would care. Anyway, I dunno what else to say. |
| On August 13th 2007 LilithDragon Said : | |
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Hi, well so far i am seeing a trend as you write in your trilogy, you are getting better. You've probably reread your stories and fixed some of the things i was going to point out. Right now the only reason i am going to post here, and not message you instead, is DRAMA. People thrive on drama, you have plenty of emotion and darkness. Thats great, but it can only get so far. You have creative vampire stories to battle with. I know you want to keep this real, lol sorry vamps, but overexaggeration isn't overrated. Think back and bring out some more horrible incidents, make the readers realize the true depth of your anger and sadness, make them realize WHY your life just isn't working. What are you thinking? What are the doubts in your mind? What are your cries to God for justice? |
| On August 13th 2007 Watiko Said : | |
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Aww....Im sorry baby =( skool sux ass you shud know that ^_^ nothin new |
