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Part 2 of Crimson Tears

Creative Created on 8-8-07 Views(148) Story Rating G
Whispered in a sad and logging voice..I do remember .Her head falling back darkness came filling her deep blue eyes her thoughts had come to a halts  .Breathing hard had he come to late? His mind raced as he held her limp body in his arms.Her warmth slowly leaving her tethered body .Holding her tight against himself a single tear slid from his eyes down his icy cheek and was snow before it even reached her pale skin.Looking up he watched in silence as snow fell around them.Holding her tight in his arms he began to jump,When suddenly the creature whom had not moved yet ripped through the trees fast and was now standing before him.It had deep black eyes  and one horn growing out of the left side of it matted hair.The other one seem to be broken off somewhere near the half way mark,one long deep scar across his chest showing great damage in the past .Tethered cloths covered his body The scar shown bright as if a battle wound trophy as he laughed you see the evil in his unmistakable black eyes.........  ((Ok you guys i am sorry i don't got time to write no more maybe tomorrow ok?)) 

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On August 26th 2007 LilithDragon Said: 
LilithDragon i am a little lost in the story.. but hopefully all will be explained in time.
On August 9th 2007 LovewitJohnny Said: 
LovewitJohnny Not the best did not have much time either sorry about that