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It was like nothing could possibly stop us. I could feel his heartbeat on his cheat as I layed there looking at the empty sky. I didn't really feel empty. It was more like I was just filled with excitement for absolutely nothing. I hate when that happened because it seems like life is going too fast. This was the first time in a long time that I've had this feeling. Since my brother and I were left alone with no more family left, life just seemed to go to waste. Did I actually like this boy? Or is it just those stupid little crushes that you have just because the other person likes you? Could Rob be the one that I spend the rest of my life? Well, what is left. His fingers were brushing through my dark long brown hair.
"All aboard!" yelled the conductor guy or whatever you're supposed to call him. It was like I was on some kind of three-year old Thomas the Train movie where we're going up a hill and we can't get back up so we take a break. But it's not like that. Because Thomas the Train doesn't mushy gushy love stories but it's not like this one is either. I stood up and started walking towards the train entrance and looked back to see if Rob was behind me. He wasn't. Where did he go? He couldn't have possibly gotten on the train already. I waited there to see if he was in line to get on the train but he wasn't
"All passengers aboard within two minutes and then we are leaving" yelled that annoying conductor guy again. I had to get on that train otherwise I will be stuck in the cold with absolutely nothing. I took slow foot steps onto the train. Is he gone? What happened? The guy that I thought I had liked was gone. For some reason, they were taking roll call by the rooms.
"Miss, what's your name" I hesitated. What is my name again? My mind went totally blank. I hate when that happens. I always feel like a complete moron with a blank face. Jan.
"Jan"
"Alright, enjoy your ride." What did I just do? My name isn't Jan. Or is it?

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On January 9th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 wow this is really good hmmmm i wonder where he went and what her name actually is.