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Vampire Blood #1

Creative Created on 12-14-07 Views(99) Story Rating G

Samantha was walking home from school one day with her best friend, Brenna. They were just chatting about different things, like they always do. Until Samantha stopped and gazed around randomly. Brenna stared at her, obviously puzzled. Samantha started to shake and run. She called out "Vampire!" But Brenna couldn't see anything. Samantha just glared at Brenna like she was blind, to Samantha, the vampire was right there in front of her. But why couldn't Brenna see it? The strange vampire flashed it's fangs at Samantha and then it vanished just as suddenly as it appeared. It was gone. Samantha fell to the ground in shock and Brenna hurried over to help her up. Samantha thanked her best friend and they slowly made their way back to their houses. When Samantha reached her house she fainted on her bed, she dreamt of the vampire and it's unusually white fangs, dripping with red blood. She woke suddenly, sweat running down her face. She got up and took a sip of water from a jug on her bedside table. She walked over to the closet to find her clothes for the day, when she opened the door, the vampire was standing there. "What do you want with me!?!" Samantha cried out in vain. The vampire just grinned madly and once again attempted to lash his fangs deep into her arm, narrowly missing. He chased Samantha into a corner, the last sound heard from her was a soft scream and then she fainted to the floor, dead. Blood poured from her arm but it wasn't red, it was partially black. It made anyone who looked at it want to die. Brenna came over later to see Samantha but when she walked into her room to greet her. She shrieked louder than ever, Samantha was on the floor, and she grimanced at the blood pouring on to the carpet. Brenna spun around to leave, but then she saw it as well, the vampire blocking the doorway. "You can only see me, if you believe in vampires, now I'll finish your fate, since you believe in your friend's death..." The vampire cackled wildly. He slashed at Brenna as she fell to the floor beside her friend, their blood joining and they were both dead. The deadly venom that had killed them was no other than pure Vampire Blood.

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On December 18th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 nice job..hmmmmm it could use more details..but nevertheless its good
On December 18th 2007 Liz912 Said :
Liz912 Thanks for all the comments guys, I really appreciate it. I've been writing stories for a long time, but this is the first mini-story I've posted on here, I will be working on Part 2 soon. I'll keep you posted.
On December 14th 2007 valerie1414 Said :
valerie1414 very different and interesting. tell me when you are done with part 2.
On December 14th 2007 Lonelygurl222 Said :
Lonelygurl222 This is very interesting.. keep me posted and good job!