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Daddy's Girl 11

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Tragedy Created on 6-20-09 Views(555) Story Rating PG

I started at Charlie, wondering what was going on. The night at my house he had seemed like my savior...The good looking doctor that wanted to save me from my father. But this man here...Was another thing entirely.

He gave me a final pearly white smile, then placed a hand on Rose's shoulder, then made his way with her out of the room.

My heart started its fast beating again as I heard the door lock. I was trapped.

Suddenly all the worst possibilities came flying through my mind, sending me to shiver as I imagined everything from him being some perverted sex fiend, to a physco man who murdered girls for pleasure.

I sat up in the green bed and finally observed the room to its full extent. There was a coldness about it. A fake mist covering everything in there. I guess if it weren't for the locks on the window, the thin layer of dust covering the dresser, lamp, and everything else in the room, and the uncomfortable part about knowing I was being locked in here by a  possible rapist...It'd be a decent room.

As I further observed the room, my head shot back to the dresser. Maybe my old clothes were in there..I looked towards the door, then as silently as possible, slid out from under the green sheets.

As I tip toed across the room I noticed the there was a note, tacked into the yellow wall paper....It just so happened that the tack was green. What time he must have taken to complete this yellow and green room.

I diverted my attention completely away from the dresser and walked towards the paper.

Keira, I'm glad to see that you are awake and well enough to be reading this letter. Thinking over the first time we met, I doubt I made the best impression. I'd truly like to fix that. I'm a very considerate and nice man once you get to know me. Of course I wouldn't have saved you from your father if I wasn't. I assume you remember my son, Richard? Yes, well, it didn't seem you got enough time to talk before, but of course I have to be careful when you do talk to him. He can be much like your father, and I certainly wouldn't want him letting you free from here, because the outside world certainly is a dangerous place. You'll meet the other girls shortly later on, that is after you get used to your room.

-Charlie

As before, fright took over as I began to realize exactly what I had gotten myself into.  

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You all are the best fans a girl could ask for! I expected 10 votes at most then come to see I have 26! And top of today! I cant express how happy I was! Thank you <3

-Kira 

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On October 9th 2009 BrokenHeart32 Said: 
BrokenHeart32 omg this is great.
On July 19th 2009 pinkslip300 Said: 
pinkslip300 i AGREEE 100% W 10SYD10!!! i dont kno how u do it kria!!! if u become an author one day, im buyin n readin all of ur books. ill be that 1 fan that will drive u carzy cuz i wont be able 2 stop emailin n writin u letters. ily so much! hehehehe ♥♥
On July 10th 2009 10sYd10 Said: 
10sYd10 again. awesome! your a freakin crazy good writer kira, keep it up!
On July 8th 2009 CRISSY10012 Said: 
CRISSY10012 yay, sorry i havent been on much but i am really loving this story i missed it thanks for righting it, if you can, willl you kmp on my other page, http://testriffic.com/user/6PurplePenguin thanks so much love ya
On July 1st 2009 addemogamer Said: 
addemogamer kmp
On June 25th 2009 ray7chel Said: 
ray7chel this is really good. kmp:)
On June 23rd 2009 erinbird777 Said: 
erinbird777 aww kira, ily, your stories are great!
On June 21st 2009 becca277 Said: 
becca277 The best =) I'm glad you took the time to write more of this ^.^
On June 20th 2009 daviswife369 Said: 
my picture
this is really good
On June 20th 2009 kalenna4 Said: 
kalenna4 I love it write more please
On June 20th 2009 ambercona Said: 
ambercona plz write more Emi! and check out my new stories plz! -Amber
On June 20th 2009 rawr21love Said: 
rawr21love OMG MORE PLZ!!!!!! xD cant wait !!!
On June 20th 2009 lovejacob Said: 
lovejacob THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD EMI!! I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW MANY VOTES YOU'RE GETTING!!! GREAT JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! LOVE YOU LOTS!!!!
On June 20th 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx Zomg I wishmy room was green and yellow :D Lol I love love love your story :)
On June 20th 2009 toni2006 Said: 
toni2006 i love it that charlie guy is very strange can't wait for the next one
On June 20th 2009 emilyanderson8 Said: 
emilyanderson8 freaky guy! Love it! hope she talks to charlies son, maybe he will help her. Post again soon!
On June 20th 2009 JadeviarCullen Said: 
JadeviarCullen Love it =)
On June 20th 2009 Vampiresrule96 Said: 
Vampiresrule96 loved it
On June 20th 2009 deadfire32 Said: 
deadfire32 omfg ilove it still you should still finish the other storys u left us all hanging lol