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Beauty Is Thin 11

Guys, whats happening, my rates and comments have fallen so much =[
Tragedy Created on 5-23-09 Views(453) Story Rating PG

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Unfortunately, forever....was more like 3 days. I was on the phone with Jody when I got Richard's message. I ignored it completely until Jody had to go, then I sighed, and opened up the chat, rolling my eyes that he had the nerve to continue talking with me.

 

Richard says:

once again, sorry

emily says:

There's nothing to be sorry for. I just want us both to stop talking. We don't need to act immature about this. We can both just stop talking now and keep all the good memories and try and forget the not so good ones.

Richard says:

that may be true. but i cant really stop thinking about how shitty i feel.

emily says:

Stop feeling shitty. Go play w.o.w. And stop thinking about this. Talking to me won't make you feel any less shitty. If anything I'll manage to make you feel worse.

Richard says:

not really, you usually make me feel better, even if you are mad at me

Richard says:

just something about talking with you makes me calm. and i cant play wow

emily says:

I'll try as hard as possible to make you feel like shit unless we stop talking now.

Richard says:

good luck. but i doubt you will.

Richard says:

im not daring you too... just saying

emily says:

Don't make me get other people involved in this Richard. I will unless we stop talking now.

Richard says:

what other people?

emily says:

Do you really want to find that out? I'm giving you three more times to type something to me, after that I'll get others involved in this.

Richard says:

what others. just tell me, dont get them involved, just let me know who?

emily says:

You've used up one. 2 left. And you'll find out if you keep talking to me.

Richard says:

GGGGGAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! whatever. be this way. good bye emily, i wont ever talk to you again. unless you want to talk to me. in which case i'll be here. but i hope your really happy, cause i wont be, not for a good fuckin while.

emily says:

Good night. Sleep well. I first offered us to both be mature about this and keep good memories. Its unfortunate that we can't do that. But I suppose this is what will go. I hope your life plays out as you wish it to play. Bye Richard.

Richard says:

it wont, and i wont. but bye, and dont think im mad at you. im not, believe me, i will remember the good memories, i'll just be sad that there cant be more, thats why i wont be happy. not cause im mad at you. thank you for everything emily. i know im going in complete opposite directions in this convo. and i swear im like(still going with third message, dont get others involved say yes if ok)

emily says:

Good night.

 

 

 

I wanted to find out what he had to say in that third message so much...But thoughts of Jody reminded me that I couldnt let that happen.

 

I breathed in slowly, then held down the power button on my computer, flopping backwards into my bed.

 

I sat there, completely quiet. No music from the Beatles for once...No hum coming from my computer...No outside noises...It was completely silent. I closed my eyes and started to listen to my breathing. I took deep breathes.

 

There was something in me that wanted to continue talking to Richard so badly...But why?!

 

I eased back down and at some point fell asleep, only to wind up waking up later that night around 3.

 

I spent so long thinking about Richard that I truly wanted to tear my mind out. I have no idea why thoughts of him kept floating around in my mind! I so badly wanted to just scream as loud as I possibly could...


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I know in the last chapter a lot of you were saying how Richard and her (um her is actually me if you havent got that part yet...) would make a good couple...But he's like....GRRR!!!!! Although I have to admit, it's actually really stress relieving to write about him.


So my comments like fell off a cliff or something...BUT! Luckily the fell onto a ledge and theres a latter next to them, so they can still climb up, but they need your help! (amazing huh XD)


Love you all <3 And I hope I keep getting more long comments like the ones from pinkslip :D <3

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On September 11th 2009 BrokenHeart32 Said: 
BrokenHeart32 I like this alot yea it got off a little but its still good keep it up.
On May 25th 2009 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 I really like im just not into stories that talk about just the girl and guy i like surprises
On May 25th 2009 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 I really like it but i feel you have got distracted and you went off subject it was suppose to be about her and her problem but now its just about her and richard
On May 25th 2009 lovejacob Said: 
lovejacob this is good em child. And Ha Ha shyla gave richard a funny voice!! Ha ha i almost peed my pants. And so i can't wait to see you next week ( aka monday) so... im not so good at long comments...XD Ok ok... well i can't wait for the next chapter, goood job. =)
On May 23rd 2009 feebleglurg Said: 
feebleglurg It's good. I liked the earlier stories more than these later ones (which may explain the drop in your comments and such) but the story is still interesting. My only question is whether this story will have an ending, or be more like an open-ended account of your life.
On May 23rd 2009 mannie512927 Said: 
mannie512927 omg its sooo amzing!! love it! i argee that u should sometimes talk to richard but not all the time! keep going
On May 23rd 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx Omg I can't believe you're going to stop talking to Richard grrr!!! I like Richard, he's a nice one :D Lol but Jody on the other hand...I dont know what I think of her, if she wasn't so helpful to you I might just have to give her the boot. I love this story, it honestly amazes me. I'm glad you're coming out with the chapters so fast too. Anddd I like how you use different font for Richard and you, this way I won't get confused for once :D And I think that your readers need to vote every time they read a new chapter, and everyone needs to leave BIG comments so that the Foodle can be happyfullz and come out with chapter even more quickly!
On May 23rd 2009 SuperGurl1232 Said: 
SuperGurl1232 Oh my gosh i love thats story plzzzz KMP......... I used to e with a guy who is a sshole but i9t seems like i am attracted to assholes for some reason so i kno how you feel lol and i bet it is stress reiliveng to write about it i kno it works for me to write when i am pissed off LOL KMP
On May 23rd 2009 findmetruth Said: 
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THis is totattly amazing I also use to be with a guy who was and sitll is an ASSHOLE Your an inspiration for me getting my story fainnaly told
On May 23rd 2009 animallover925 Said: 
animallover925 I like Jody and Richard. Jody is Protective and Richard is a good friend. The story is very good and im glad you are getting them out so fast. It makes me happy:)
On May 23rd 2009 erincullen7 Said: 
erincullen7 ok so ill comment... umm richard is an ass jody is being a bitch ummm, her is actually you? did not no that i love your story you should totally check out my stories :D ummmmmmmmm idk what else more i could ummm great storie :D byeeee
On May 23rd 2009 kalenna4 Said: 
kalenna4 I love richard he seems nice. I love the story
On May 23rd 2009 lacierose333 Said: 
lacierose333 I really like Richard. I don't know why. Maybe it's because I am a hopeless romantic. I want someone to care for me the way he obviously cares for you.
On May 23rd 2009 pinkslip300 Said: 
pinkslip300 lol wow deathroses u ahve a lot to say! but kira, how the hell do u make these stories so fast? itd take me weeks! haha but thatz just cuz i cant write a story tosave my life. anywayz i lked this chp, n it told a lot bout how richard n u feel. so ur confused rite now im grasping? haha i bet he's "grrrr!" but wat else do u feel towards him? (this is just my thought) wat im thinkin is that u DONT want to talk to him n u definatly dont want HIM to talk to u. u just want him to leave u the fuck alone so u can go on w life. but he keeps talkin 2 u n itz gettin harder n harder. n now, u dont know wat 2 do anymore n u want to figure this guy out but ur confused. idk lol sorry if im totally off! luv yaz kira!! ♥♥
On May 23rd 2009 deathroses111 Said: 
deathroses111 Lets see long comments? hmm what can i say. i hate richard. the writting is too small. could you make it a tiny bit bigger? also i have a few stories. read them if you like. hmm more to say. OH yes i hate HATE jody. shes rawr. i cant believe she cant see that he friend is hurting from a mistake she(Jody) made.