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Once we landed I simply followed Daniel. As we walked through the air port I stared out the tall windows, the sky outside was a deep blue like a flowing river, there was fog which a lot of people hated, but for me fog was the best kind of weather. The only thing I wished now was that I would have packed my long black coat, although it wasn't freezing it certainly wasn't warm!

“Ok, guess we can wait here until the car gets here, it's a burgundy honda so pay attention.” Daniel instructed.

We waited there, watching for cars, the silence between us growing. Although I was deeply disturbed by the silence it obviously didn't effect him, he just stared out towards the cars, a tired expression on his face.

I desperately thought of something to get my attention away from the awkward setting and to my amazing luck my phone rang at that second.

“Oh damn let me get that..” I murmured digging in my pocket.

“Hello?”


“Hey Camille. This is Gavin, so you've arrived in Oregon?” Gavin asked. Gavin was one of my best friends back home, he was always there for me, although it was quite obvious he liked me.

“Gavin! Glad you called, yes I have, but my name's Mia.” I corrected, rolling my eyes.


“Boyfriend back home?” Daniel asked silently, not trying to interrupt, but amused at the idea.

“No, no, he's just a friend.” I replied.

 

“Who are you talking to?” Gavin asked.

“Oh no one! Just a guy I met.” I quickly explained.


“Just a guy? I thought we were more baby?” Daniel laughed, saying this loud enough for Gavin to hear, obviously he was having fun playing with Gavin's mind.

“Shut up!” I whispered, elbowing him.

 

“Mia who's the guy with you?! He's not your boyfriend is he?!” Gavin roared, loud enough for Daniel to hear, at least he called me by the name I wanted.

“No! No, it's not like that!” I assured.

 

“Yoink, I'll be borrowing that” Daniel stated, taking my cell away.

“No! Give it!” I begged, knowing Gavin would only get mad at Daniel's idea of a joke.

 

“Hello kind sir, may I ask why exactly you're talking to my girlfriend?” Daniel lectured holding my head away from my cell.

“Boyfriend?! Mia doesn't have any boyfriend!” Gavin yelled back, half to himself, reassuring himself that I didn't.”

I finally managed to grab my cell phone back, although I was sure Daniel had let me grab it back instead of keeping it.

The conversation between us went on for only a minute longer before Daniel broke out into song, using his girliest voice possible.

“Ooooo deary me,
My little brother's in his bedroom smoking weed,
I tell him he should get up cause it's nearly half past three
He can't be bothered cause he's high on THC.
I ask him very nicely if he'd like a cup of tea,
I can't even see you cause the room is so smokey,
Don't understand how one can watch so much TV,
My baby brother Alfie how I wish that you could see.”

Although I was pissed at him for interrupting me and Gavin again I couldn't help but laughing.

“Hey, Mia, there's the car, let's go.” Daniel said getting his bags.

“Well got to go Gavin see ya.” I said quickly, hanging up the phone before he could respond.

“Well he was certainly a cheery old mate.” Daniel laughed.

“You know you didn't have to tease him like that” I scolded.

We hesitantly got into the car, him and his aunt in front and me in back.

“Daniel! I'm so glad to see you! And who is this?” His aunt asked, smiling at me. She was very attractive, she had long red hair, not the kind of red as in the kid with the red frizzy hair and freckles but a beautiful red the was simply...beautiful. Her face was painted, with deep blue eyes the color of the sky on that rare fall day when the sky is perfectly blue without a hint of gray.

“This is Mia. She'll be attending Greenwood's Academy as a freshman, she has no relatives here and since we won't be attending school for another week, she would just be staying in her dorm. So instead I though she'd like to have dinner with us, that's ok right?” Daniel asked.

“A guest! Great! And a pretty girl at that! Of course she'll stay, she must!” She insisted.

“Well thank you so much for the generous offer.” I thanked.

“Certainly! My name's Teresa, but you can just call me Mom.” Teresa assured.

The drive to their Teresa's house went by quickly by me listening to her and Daniel talk. They were 100% better than any show on t.v! Just listening to them argue and discuss stuff already made me feel apart of their family, it was a such great feeling.

We pulled into the drive of a two story house with two windows at the top of the house that were amazingly large! The house was beautiful, with all it's lights on, shining in the sky of the setting sun.

It was the most beautiful house I had ever seen, and on the porch of this beautiful house was was a girl with golden hair down to her waist and a white sun dress on. She looked to be older than me, maybe a junior like Daniel. Along with the most stunning house I had ever seen was certainly the most stunning girl along with it.

 

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Hehe~ So this chapter was better or worse than the last two, be honest, improving is always good =]

 So who do you think the "stunning" girl is?

And btw...What do you think of Daniel's song :D

 

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On October 21st 2008 d0icount Said :
d0icount his sister, or mom. idk
On October 20th 2008 fangirl222 Said :
fangirl222 i'm really liking this story, and i love the song! xD
On October 15th 2008 Beyond0Reality Said :
Beyond0Reality Aww that's depressing, I actually thought there'd be weed in this story...ah well. And don't knock THC. That stuff is AMAZING.
On October 5th 2008 stephjane Said :
stephjane hahaha lol. i like it. keep going.
On October 4th 2008 kingXblazer Said :
kingXblazer the song is plagerized its lily allens nd i agree with dominican817 it must be his cousing.
On October 2nd 2008 dominican817 Said :
dominican817 daniels song was funny lol I liked it &+ I think the "stunning" girl is his cousin, after all they are at his aunts house...but I love it so far so please keep on writing...I wanna hear more =]
On October 1st 2008 Jaydestar14 Said :
Jaydestar14 this is awesome as!!! the song was brilliant and i think the 'stunning' girl is either the girlfriend (hopefully not)or the sister or the aunt's aka 'mom' little girl or a neighbor dropping by! I can't decide!!;D
On September 30th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 i loved daniel's song it made me laugh so much and my friend was reading over my should and was like wtf are you reading which made me laugh harder and i think that the stunning girl is his sister or girlfriend
On September 30th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 daniel's song was funny i liked it i think maybe the stunning girl is either his sister,cousin or girlfriend i like that his aunt wants to be called mom this was a great chapter the phone conversations was so funny
On September 29th 2008 xxxshylaxxx Said :
xxxshylaxxx i loved daniels song it was awesome!!!!!!!!! great story btw i cant wait until u post the next one!!!!!!!!
On September 29th 2008 suicidalcowgrl Said :
suicidalcowgrl I loved Daniel's song. And I hope that chick isn't Gavin's girlfriend. That would really suck.
On September 29th 2008 momoleighann Said :
momoleighann i love the song!!! and i really hope that the chick isnt his gf!!!! that would suck so damn bad!!!
On September 29th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess daniel's song is HILARIOUS. that girl better NOT be his girlfriend. and its funny the aunt wants to be called mom. and the phone convo. with Gavin was brilliant! and i hope you post the next one soon!
On September 29th 2008 Kookiemoo Said :
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Really good! I subscribed
On September 29th 2008 kiss4nutn Said :
kiss4nutn lol daniels song was tight. maybe his twin sister? yeah i'd say it was better.