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March 9th

 Dear Lolly, my mom said that she didn't want me to go for an all niter. She said knowing me that i'd get into trouble. I hardly ever did anything like she said i do, I begged her and she still said no, well i have 2 days to convince her and if not i will go any how. Who cares what she thinks. Any William texted me and asked if we could hang after school today. Of course i said yes i can't wait. William makes me smile for the first time since before i lost my brother. He is a bit taller then me, nice brown skin, and auburn eyes that are gorgeous! And oh! He called me gorgeous yesterday! I nearly fainted with happiness.

Love, Niya.

 After school as it happened-

 "Niya!" William called my name running up. "How are you?"

 "Oh hey Willy!" i hugged him tightly "Good, how are you?" 

 He smiled, "Better now" He gestured for me to follow him so i did.

 "Want to go some where?" he asked.

 "Where?"

 "Niya you'll see"

 "Okay fine" I laughed and walked with him to his car. His car was a silver Jetta and it wasn't a beater either, it was nice.  We drove for a few minutes listening to a Tupac cd. "I love this song" i laughed and he nodded at me.

 "Here we are" he said and i looked around.

 "Oh we are at the zoo! i love the zoo!" i said.

 "Yup, want to go on a date with me there?" he asked and i exploded with happiness, "YES!" 

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On August 13th 2008 jaztitch Said :
jaztitch lol, I did something like this... mine was sadder though...bout a suicidal kid...
On June 30th 2008 MossmanShenko Said :
MossmanShenko very nice. Reminds me of a game I play called TEC