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The Unexpected (Part 10)

Authors Comments: There was a party in this story, and we all know parties get crazy, so sorry if it was disturbing for you in the beginning, just trying to expand my writing levels =]
Romance Created on 8-6-08 Views(314) Story Rating R

 

The Unexpected

(Part 10)

 

Recap:

“Damnnnnnn baby!! I knew you were cute ,” he said licking his lips ,” but damn I didn’t know you were hot, mamy.” He said making you feel uncomfortable but for some reason you loved the fact he loved it and it made you feel weird and different. Maybe this place is changing you.

You guys arrived at the party and that’s where everything started.

 

 

Andy left you and got something to drink for the both of you and you went closer to a circle where all the guys where cheering and laughing at something and saw that there were two girls and a guy there.

 The two girls made out and one girl spanked the other and then she grabbed him and made out with him while the other girl just put her hand on her mouth as to say “Oh!” when she grabbed him down there. Then they left and I guess it happened again with different people. You were instantly disgusted and you couldn’t believe this was normal for them and that they touch themselves like that.

You were going to walk away when you felt someone’s hand on you and tugged it.

“Everyone thinks you’ll make a great threesome with Jaret and Amy.” He said and you didn’t have much time to guess who they were because they pushed you inside the group where you guess it was Jaret and Amy making out but then Amy walked towards you and put a hand on your breast as if to say “Oops!” and the guy grinned as he came towards you and grabbed your face to kiss you but you turned away and tried to leave but I guess the girl isn’t used to being rejected so she pulls you in for a kiss and you notice everyone is cheering and you don’t know why but you felt like you had to make an impression on them and you gave that kiss everything you got and got more cheers.

 

The girl grinned and pushed you to the guy as he grabbed your waist and let his hand grope your ass and made out with you and you kissed back, surprisingly. The girl came behind you and pressed you against the guy as she grabbed your ass and the guy grabbed your breasts and that crossed the line. You smiled as you walked away from the circle and you guessed they were satisfied and left you alone after that. You bumped into Andy and he gave you the drink you wanted and you went outside and drank it and you saw Ashley, Nicole, and Lindsay looking gorgeous as always.

You then saw Derek coming towards you and Andy with his hands shyly into his jeans pocket. You gulped it down and asked Andy to get you another drink as Derek sat next to you.

“So how’s the party going so far?” he asked smiling.

“Crazy.” You replied laughing

“Didn’t they party like this where you came from?” he asked

“Nope.” You said.

“That’s one of the things I would’ve loved about your town.” He said.

“Don’t like parties?” you asked looking at him as if he was an alien

“Not meaningless ones like these.” He said as he laughed at your expression and you relaxed and laughed along with him.

Then the guy who was the one who took you into the circle came over.

“Dude Derek!! She looked hot making out with Amy and Jaret.” He said and you could tell he was drinking a lot.

“Calm down TJ.”he said and you looked at the guy that’s hosting this party as he ran away.

“I need to talk to you.” Ashley said and you looked up.

“About?” you said in the same mean tone she was giving you.

“That you need to stay away.” She said looking at you in disgust.

“Don’t start, Ashley.” Derek said looking at her the same way you were.

“No its okay, I’ll go.” You said reassuring him that you’ll be okay.

“Stay away from Derek, he’s mine.” She said and you started to get a little dizzy.

“Says who?” you said

“Me.” She said as you started to get real dizzy and then she pushed you into the pool nearby and you fainted and hit your head on the pool floor. You heard yelling and splashing and someone arms around you and you opened your eyes to see Derek over you.

“Someone call 911!!!” he yelled.

“Derek?” you asked

“It’s okay Roxy. Can someone please call 911!!!” he said and then looked at Ashley.

“Me and you, we’re over. Don’t talk to me, don’t look at me, and don’t even think about me.” He said to her.

“Someone’s on their way.” Someone said to Derek.

“Everything’s going to be okay, Roxy.” Derek said to you.

Everything was going to be okay you thought and you hoped it was true.

 

 

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On August 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
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