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The Unexpected (Part 8)
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The Unexpected
(Part 8)
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You got your bike and started walking away
“Wait!!” he said coming after you.
“Come with me.” He said taking your hand into his and you look down and you don’t know why but you couldn’t help but smile and nod as you let him take you wherever he planned to go.
You didn’t know where he was taking you and surprisingly you didn’t care as you got into his car and he put both of your bikes in the back and came into the drivers seat and gave you a smile.
You asked him how long will it take to get there and he said half an hour so you decided to take a nap and the next thing you know you felt a cool breeze and someone carrying you and you opened your eyes and saw Derek’s face and you smiled and he looked down at you and looked at you for a minute and then smiled and then you looked around and saw you were at a beach in the night. It looked familiar but it looked beautiful because the sun was already leaving the view and it took your breath away.
“Amazing,” you said astonished.
“Yes you are” he said smiling but you didn’t notice he was talking about you because you were still trapped into the view. You smiled impishly and told him to let you go and you went and got your feet wet only and you planned to keep it that way. You turned around and smiled and then you saw Derek taking off his pants and shirt only to have shorts and a very hot looking six pack and you almost drooled in front of him.
“Like what you see?” he asked grinning as he came closer to you and went inside the water.
“Come on.” He said urging you to come inside.
“No I don’t want to get wet.” You said inching backwards when you saw a grin on his face and started making his way towards you. You stayed still and he circled around you and you noticed he looked so hot with his hair down dripping with water and his abs having this oily but yet clean look on them and the water trickled down and down.
He smirked and pressed his body against yours and your clothes got wet and you felt desire, lust, and something tell you to press harder against him but no you couldn’t he was a taken man. He presses his body against you harder and his chest was now behind your back and he put his hands on your waist and started to leave you trails of kisses on your neck and he whispered something to you and you got excited even more which wasn’t normal for you then he carried you and threw you in the water and you wanted to back to get air but he pulled you underwater and kissed you and your legs went around his waist and he grabbed your hips pulling you as close as he could and then you guys went up but that didn’t stop the kiss or the physical contact or the fact that your hands were beginning to wander around. You broke the kiss and grinned as you swam away but he grinned and got you back only to kiss you harder and hungrier and god what you would’ve done if you were in a hotel room, you shuddered thinking about that. Derek asked if you were cold and you said no and this time YOU kissed HIM and he was surprised but not really as she grabbed you and you guys kissed and talked throught out the whole night until you thought it was time to go home and he dropped you off and invited you to a party and you agreed giving him a peck but he pulled you in for a make out session and then he grinned as he said good night.
You were grinning as you opened your door and opened it to see Chris and Valerie making out and you closed the door before letting them see you and went through the backway and up to your room to sleep and think about today and then your thoughts quickly went to how far are Chris and Valerie are going to go today but for some reason you trusted Chris with her and ended up leaving them alone the rest of the night.
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| On July 31st 2008 buzzingbee21 Said : | |
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Love it kmp! |
| On July 30th 2008 thatchickunew Said : | |
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i like it kmp |
| On July 30th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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Nice!KMP please! |
| On July 30th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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it wasn't bad, but you should had added more periods, commas even in the long run on paragraph. but i liked it. (: |
| On July 30th 2008 LadyVivy Said : | |
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lol yea derek has a girlfriend but you'll find out why hes doing this later on sorry for the susupense....guess you'll have to keep reading to find out. =P |
| On July 30th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said : | |
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woah! wot is derek playing at?? kmpp |
| On July 30th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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OMG I AM SO MAD A DEREK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well yeah "I" should be happy, BUT he HAS a girlfriend and thats just NOT right. and WOOOO to chris and valerie lol. please keep me posted!!!!!!!!!! |
| On July 30th 2008 sportshottie4e Said : | |
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love it kmp!!! |
| On July 30th 2008 LadyVivy Said : | |
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rate and comment plz |


