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 Created on 5-31-08
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Journal Entry 1
May 14th
Have you ever been so far gone that the possibility of you returning is unfeasible? Have you ever been so destroyed that the likely hood of your survival is impractical?
Have you ever felt so lost, so alone, so miserable? Have you ever been broken? Life itself proves to be a favorable thing…but when broken nothing matters for anything.
When your own father breaks into your innocents and robs you of that joy. Nothing matters…not even your own happiness.
Ellie quickly closed her journal as the sound of a rusty motor pulled into the driveway. Her father was home. Ellie looked desperately around her room…not quite sure what she was looking for. Her heart pounded with confusion and desperation as her father slammed the door and made his way to the house. Why was she so afraid? She knew what was about to happen…it happened everyday.
Or at least since 2 years ago when her mother died. So why was she afraid? Why was she so haunted by her father still…even though she knew what he’d do when he finally made it to her room. She heard the front door open and the close. He was in the house. ‘’ELLIE!’’ he shouted drunkenly. His footsteps became louder and louder as he approached her room. Then finally the footsteps stopped. He was outside her door.
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Please Login to post comments| On May 31st 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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kmp, sounds a lot like my story Memories lol great start |
| On May 31st 2008 xXMzKekeXx Said : | |
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kmp |
| On May 31st 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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it has my attention..kmp |
| On May 31st 2008 SunkistLover21 Said : | |
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kmp. It's good so far. |
