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Sin Can Be Beautiful
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Chapter 1: His Sinful Eyes
''Now you have absolutely nothing to worry about Mr. Crandal. Here at the Creston Christain Academy your daughter will be spoiled with the best education money can buy.'' Mr. Winder nervously squabbled in his golden laced chair, that went right along with his beautifully decorated gold and bargondy office. A chanderlier hung high in the ceiling, casting the office in a soft, luminous glow.
''I do not doubt in my mind that Creston is a wonderful school Mr. Winder.'' he said, deeply. ''What about you Ms. Lucy? Do you like the school so far?'' Mr. Winder asked. Lucy was tall and slim with curves sharp enough to cut stone. Her hair was long and wavy and reminded many people of a red sea, angry and beautiful. Her eyes were a demanding blue, adding a soft, lustful touch to her perfectly smooth skin.
''I am sure Creston will be excellent.'' she wailed politely. Mr. Winder smiled triumphantly. ''Excellant.'' he chuckled. ''I'll just call in Mr. Woods and he'll show you to your room.'' Mr. Winder pushed a small red button and somewhere beyond the large, double doors a ssmall bell went off. The doors opened in a rush. A boy with dark hair and piercing green eyes stood grimacing in the thresh hole. ''You rang.'' he said, eyeing Lucy. ''Yes....please help Ms. Crandal with her bags and lead her to her dormitory.'' Simon Woods smiled sinfully.
From the lustful gaze in his eyes Lucy could already tell they were going to be the best of friends. Perhaps even closer.
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| On November 29th 2007 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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awesome. keep me posted |
| On November 23rd 2007 analyssarenae Said : | |
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i like it! keep me posted! |
| On November 20th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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It sounds pretty good so far. There is one thing though. It doesn't seem like the director to a Christian academy would say "spoiled with all that money can buy". Even if it's true, it seems more that he would say 'given' and not mention how much money it cost. Christians, it seems to me, would outwardly subscribe to the pious philosophy of not caring about material wealth, while secretly, it is actually highly regarded. Of course this is just my opinion, so feel free to write how you wish. But I do like the story, and I would love to see how it continues. :) |
| On November 20th 2007 heartzcanbleed Said : | |
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keep me posted |
| On November 20th 2007 firerocket67 Said : | |
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pleeeeeeeeeeease lekeep me posted! excellent job by the way |
| On November 20th 2007 lisamcox Said : | |
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Lemme know when you write more. |
| On November 20th 2007 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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this is great plz keep me posted! |
| On November 20th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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keep me posted please. =] |


