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JayJay chased after the ambulance, but he wasn't quick enough they were gone. He looked at his feet, "Why couldnt you have ran faster damn you?" he yelled.
"Need a lift?" Jason said pulling up with the car and JayJay smiled. "Yeah man!" and ran to the car and climbed in. "I thought you were gone Jason"JayJay said out of breath.
"Don't worry i am going to leave soon" he anwsered. "What?" JayJay said, "Why? You don't have to go because of me!" JayJay said. "Mostly because i care about Kiana Jay," Jason sighed.
"I know you have known her longer so i cannot get in the way." he whispered. "But Jason i knew you a long time too, and i don't want a chick to come between us!" JayJay laid his hand on Jasons shoulder.
"Same here man." Jason said as they pulled up to the hospital just after the ambulance. JayJay got out the car and looked at Jason, "Come with me in!" he said. "You want me too?" he asked suprised.
"Of course man, come on!" he said and they ran inside. Jasons heart pounded and so did JayJays they loved Kiana and both couldn't stand to see her hurt.
"Excuse me we need to find which room Kiana Rowel is in!" Jason said to the nurse. "Names?" she asked and Jason twisted his face. "Why you need our names?" But he gave her their names.
"Your not family you cannot visit her in this condition." JayJay started to get mad "Yes we can!" he banged his fists. Then JayJay did something that shocked Jason.
"Actually uh, Jasons her Fiance so you got to let us!" he said and Jason knew he was lieng, but for a good cause. The nurse looked at them then sighed. "Okay but only Her fiance" she said.
"What no!" Jason said, "Please let JayJay come to he is my cousin!" the lady raised an eye brow but then gave them her room number. They ran to it. "Thanks JayJay" Jason whispered.
They walked into the room and a doctor had a clip board in his hands. He seemed to be writing down stuff about her condition. The guys just watched him untill he turned around.
"May i help you two gentlemen?" he asked polietly. "Um yes how is she sir?" JayJay asked concerned. "She is in a coma right now, but she is good" the doctor said. "SHE IS IN A COMA HOW IS SHE GOOD?" Jason yelled.
JayJay calmed him down then he apologized "Sorry its been a crazy day" he said and the doctor laughed. "I will let you two visit her alone" and he walked out the room.
"Kiana can you hear me?" JayJay asked her but of course there was no response. Kiana was in a coma with tubes down her throat. "Its me JayJay, and Jasons here too Kiana" he whispered.
Jason started to tear up, "Kiana WE love you"
Weeks later
"She has been doing well Jason but she still remains asleep." the doctor said and Jason frowned."I don't know if she'll ever wake up" he sighed. "HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE? SHE DOESNT HAVE BRAIN DAMAGE!" Jason cried.
"Actually she has some partial damage, in our inspection it seems that when she hit the wall not only did she hit her back, but her head." the doctor told him and Jason looked to her.
"Look i know you love her but you have to let go!" the doctor suggested. "LET HER GO??? YOUR CRAZY SHE ISNT BRAIN DEAD ITS ONLY BEEN A FEW WEEKS!" he cried and the doctor said "I will let you think" and walked out.
"JayJay wake up" he said shaking him, "They want to turn Kiana's machine off!" he cried. "WHAT?" JayJay said they can't!" They both talked to kiana's coma self for a while.
Jason said he had an idea and that he would kiss her and maybe she'll wake up. "Its not sleeping beauty!" JayJay laughed but said, "Try." So Jason went up and kissed her lips, then a screech from JayJay made him look at kiana's face, eyes wide open..........
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| On January 21st 2008 individulsong Said : | |
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hahah this is really good! I envy you. |
| On January 18th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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shiiiiiiit this is good!!!!!keep me posty plzz |
| On January 16th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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lol love the last part :D you'd better think up something good! |
| On January 15th 2008 Justawriter Said : | |
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hmm any advice for next one? and what are your votes for who Kiana should be with
Jason
or JayJay |


