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Crazy Love (real 8)

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 Kiana leaned against a table to stand up, then wiped some tears away. "Why is it all about me now?" she whispered to them and they looked at her. "You can't like both of us" Jason sighed, "Yeah so who do you really love?" JayJay asked her. Kiana gave a faint cry then said, "I really cannot think right now I'm sorry," She said dizzy then looked as if she was going to fall, then she did.

 "OH MY GOD SHE COLLAPSED!" JayJay yelled running up, "It most be from the back injury" he cried. "CALL 911!" A bartender ran to the phone and dialed quickly. Jason stood behind them looking sadly, "Poor Kiana" he thought and looked at JayJay at her side. A tear went down Jasons face and he looked towards the door. "Ima silly white boy with my hopes to high" he thought. "JayJay is cleary the right match for Kiana" he whispered and headed to the door.

 "hey man where are you going?" the ambulance isn't even here yet!" JayJay yelled. "You deserve her more JayJay" Jason teared, "Tell her when she awakes some lie that i was a jerk so she'll choose you"he forced a grin. "You deserve her man, and i wont get in the way, i will be gone by tonight" He said heading out. JayJay was too speachless to reply he just cuddled Kiana by his side.

 "You'll be okay Baby" he whispered, "You'll be okay!" People moved out the way as paramedics came in. "Step away now Sir!" they told him. "Why this is my Love i gotta stay!" he cried. "Sir move she can have a broken back so we need to move with cation!" he explained and JayJay nodded and moved out the way.

 They lifted Kiana's body onto the stretcher and rolled her to the loud ambulance. JayJay watched them close the doors, "NOO WAIT!" he cried, "LET ME COME!" he yelled chasing after Kiana's ambulance, "LET ME BE WITH MY LOVE!"

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On January 12th 2008 asianxshawtie Said :
asianxshawtie nicee.
On January 11th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 omg!!!dis is major good!!!!need to write more and fast lol *thumbs up*=]
On January 11th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Aww, what's gonna happen? This is sad! *tear rolls down cheek*
On January 10th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic That was a good "holy crap," by the way...
On January 10th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Holy crap!