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  INTRO

 My face pressed against the car window, staring at my family members and loved ones wave good bye to us, and wipe away tears. They mouthed they loved me and we began to back out the drive way in our moving truck. I had kept my emotions the hole time bottled up, all the months before i moved i didn't cry. Even as we pulled away i tried to remain strong and not tear.

 We slowly drove away from our street, asure it would be goodbye forever. Just as we reached the street light i burst into tears. Ever single tear i bottled up had burst out and I was finally letting it out. My brother looked over from the driver side and wiped away my tears. "Angel Leigh its okay" He frowned he hated to see me so sad.

 "ITS NOT OKAY QUINTY!" I snapped. "MOM, DAD THERE GONE! FOREVER!"i added. "AND NOW WERE LEAVING EVERYTHING WE'VE KNOWN AND LEAVING THEIR GRAVES!" tears flowed my face. Quinty pulled over to the side of the road and put car in park. "Look I love Mom and Dad too okay?" he touched my cheek. "But we need to move on, trust me please?" he hugged me and i gripped him tight.

 He took the car out of park and got back on the road to our new home, hundred of miles away from our parents, their graves.

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On January 12th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 it was good
On January 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Am I going to need a kleenex box near by for this one? Keep me posted.
On January 10th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Keep me posted!
On January 10th 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 I love it! Sounds good! kmp :P
On January 10th 2008 valerie1414 Said :
valerie1414 very interesting story! wish you wrote more! love it