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(sorry been really busy thats why it took so long.)
Jason held Kiana's hand in the car as they sat in the back seat while JayJay drove to get Brie. Kiana looked over and Jason and admired his face, she was inlove. "So um Kiana you met Brie right?" JayJay asked. "Yeah she is okay" she anwsered as they pulled up to her house.
"Damn that white girl most be rich!" Kiana exclaimed at the size of her house. "Hey i'm white too, although i'm not rich!" Jason laughed and Kiana cuffed her mouth. "Oops sorry" she laughed and Jason did too. "Hey JayJay" Brie leaned into his window and kissed him. Something in Kiana triggered and she wanted to slap her so bad.
"This is my friend Jason, and Kiana" JayJay introduced them. "Eh yeah i know Kiana i met her before" she rolled her eyes and sat down in the front seat. Kiana felt like kicking her seat, although she now liked Jason she didn't want JayJay with a hoe like Brie.
*Hour later*
They pulled up to the resteraunt near the Tray club. "Okay lets eat then we can goto the club alright?" JayJay told them and everyone nodded then climbed out the car. The place was italian and served mostly many types of pastas, salads, and pizzas. They waited about 7 minutes then they were seated at a table near the window.
The window over looked a beautiful lake full of boats fishing. "Isn't it pretty Jason?" Brie smiled at him. Jason shook his head. "Why is she talking to Jason in a flirty way??" kiana angrilly thought. "Yes it is Jason" Kiana held Jason's arm in an affectionat way.
"Dang if Kiana wants to make me jealous she sure is doing it well" JayJay thought. The watress came to take orders starting with Kiana. "I'd like 2 pieces of meat pizza, and some spaghetti and garlic bread then some fries." Kiana laughed she always ate alot and still tiny. "Dang thats my Kiana!" JayJay laughed.
The guys ordered their food then it came to Brie to order hers. "Um just a small salad please i don't want to ruin my figure" she said and looked at kiana out of the corner of her eye. Jason saw the anger in Kiana's eyes he knew she would explode soon. They all talked smally about their intrests as they ate their food but Kiana couldn't help but wanting to take her fork and force feeding that skinny bit** Brie.
After eating they all went next door to the club to get their groove on. (haha) They walked up into the entrance and the bouncer smiled, "Hey there Kiana hows your family doing?" Kiana smiled nicely and anwsered "Good hows your wife George?" he laughed. "Pregnant with triplets!" he laughed with joy. "I'll bet you will make the new paper!" she laughed and he let the group in.
"Want some drinks?" JayJay asked and everyone said "Heck yeah!" they knew he was older and he would buy them the achohal. JayJay was 21, Jason was 20, Kiana was 19, and Brie was 18. JayJay quickly returned with drinks, "You are my hero man!" Kiana laughed taking a beer and chugging it, "Man girl you still get me with how fast you chug" JayJay laughed admiring her. "She is the realest chick i know," he thought to himself.
The music started to play and it was "Low". Kiana laughed "This my song!" and Brie gave her a look like she could dance better. "Your own Kiana!" Brie yelled and they both started to dance. Before they knew it everyone formed a circle around them and cheered on. By the end of the song the aworded Kiana best dancer this angered Brie.
When kiana wasn't looking Brie charged at her and knocked her back into the wall, a fight began....
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| On January 6th 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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Dang...another cliffhanger...lmao...plzzzzzzz write more and soon. I'm dyin 2 noe wats gonna happen...lol...plzzzz KMP!!! |
| On January 6th 2008 asianxshawtie Said : | |
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hahahs ihts good. keep me posted ;) |
| On January 6th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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ooooooooh shiznit!!!!cliffhanger!!!omg ya gotta write more soon lmao keeps meh posted=] |
| On January 6th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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It's cool; slow down a bit so as to make it clearer. But DUDE keep me posted! |


