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Thanks for the memories

Fiction Created on 12-18-07 Views(66) Story Rating G

  It was Winter break and my friend Mike and I were going to stay in a hotel, in Fort lauderdale Florida. We planned on hanging out at the beach all break and meeting some Chicks. My name is Brian by the way. Ever sense i was 2 years old Mike and I had been bestfriends. We even could be considered brothers how close we were.

 My parents weren't the most perfect people, infact they hardly were even around for me. It was Mikes parents who kissed my booboos and brought me to my first prom, i even called them Mom and Pop. The only time i was home was when my real Mom would ban me from leaving. Although she never looked for me so i could sneak out at night and craw into Mikes window and we'd play video games.

 That Winter break Mike and I stayed in the hotel was a Christmas gift from "Mom and Pop." We loved the party life of Florida, we hadn't seen anything like it where we were from. The first day we were there we went straight to the beach. We laid towels on the warm sand and watched pretty girls in bikinis sun bathe near us. It was truely fun.

 Mike asked this one brunette named Candy out, she was extremely pretty. They wanted to double date so they insisted i'd go out with her friend Jenny who was a firing red head. She ended up being a really beautiful young woman, 5'7 and i was 6'3. We got into their car and went driving and pretty fast. We were standing out the sun roof and waving our arms in the arm screaming. It was a great memory.

 We then reached the club and Mike was afraid that we would be able to get in because we were only 18. But we were wrong they didn't even ask and we drank all the beer we wanted. Jenny wanted me to dance and i barley could walk how drunk i was. But we some how managed to get onto the dance floor.

 I got tired and wanted to go back to the hotel so Jenny drove me back. Mike insisted that he'd stay there and i could go back. In the hotel me and Jenny made out and then i fell asleep and she passed out on the couch. I awoke to thunder and looked around, Jenny had left to pick up Candy and Mike but he wasn't here..

 I staggered to my feet and i had a terrible head ache. I went into the bathroom and washed my face. Just as i dried my face some one knocked at the door. I blinked the water out my eyes and anwsered the door. I opened the door and in the rain stood Jenny crying and a police officer. "I'M SORRY!" She cried...

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On December 19th 2007 asianxshawtie Said :
asianxshawtie keep meh posted x)
On December 19th 2007 valerie1414 Said :
valerie1414 omg i love this story! you have to make the next one soon! keep me posted.
On December 18th 2007 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 it was pretty good.