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Romance Created on 1-13-08 Views(212) Story Rating G

     A large fat man emerged from the car along with a skinny awkward looking redheaded boy.

Gabriel got out of the car followed by Chyrstal.“Can I help you gentlemen?” 

“Yes as a matter of fact. Are you Gabriel Vargas? And are you Chyrstal Johnson?”

“yes.” They both answered at the same time.

“Hi, I’m Officer Levensen and this is my partner Odus.”

“Nice to meet you. We were just on our way out, and there is no one home, so if you don’t mind, my parents will return around 5:30.” Gabriel stated politely.

“Well, we’re not here for your parents we’re here for you.” He said motioning towards Chyrstal.

“Me?” she questioned.

“Yes, I’m sorry to tell you this, but there is a hostage situation with your cousin Bobby Phillips and his girlfriend Celia Borges. Could you please come with me?”

“Uh.” She was speechless.

“Oh, your boyfriend can come too I guess.” He added

“He’s not- how is this-, who is with-.” She stuttered past the different questions that she wanted to ask but couldn’t get out. She stood there in shock.

“Can we follow in my car?” asked Gabriel.

“Uh sure. Just come on, cause she was asked for specifically.” Officer Levensen said.

“Okay.” Gabriel walked to where Chyrstal was standing and put his arms around her waits. “Hey. Come on we have to go. You can help. Don’t worry, nothings going to happen. Okay? Everything is going to be fine. Now come on.” He helped her in to the passenger’s side of the car and she got in. he closed the door and walked over to the Officer.

“Hey, who exactly has the hostages?” he asked

“An Anthony Mendez.”

Gabriel sighed. “I was afraid of that.”

He walked back to the car, got in and headed off towards Bobby’s house.

Author’s Note: hey, so what do you think? Feedback please! Please take the poll on my page! Tell your friends! 15 till the next one!! Thanks so much!

*J*

P.s. if you could check out my friend atavanhalen ‘s stories. *a stranger named Dean* and *of love and Lust*

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On January 15th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
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jessimerri369 love it kmp plz
On January 14th 2008 odieeido Said :
odieeido 9 votes so far :) keep me posted and put the next one up soon plz :)
and thnx for reading my story.
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LonelyReality9 i love it! well plz keep me posted =]]
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4eversusan Its Good... I Havent Really Got Many Votes On My Story But If I Continue It Ill Keep You Posted.
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On January 13th 2008 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss interesting. keep me posted.