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Not Another High School Love...(14)
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 Created on 12-31-07
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She looked at the door, as if she could see through it.
A voice screamed in her head Chyrstal, what is wrong with you?! Do you want to lose him like you did with your mom? No I don’t think so. So stop. Stop it right now! If you don’t he’ll be gone forever.She got off the bed and looked around.Do I stay? No. I should leave before he gets hurt.
She walked swiftly to the door they both came in and down the hallway. She quickly went down the stairs and out the front door. It took her a total of one minute and thirty seconds to accomplish this, then she realized, she had no money, she had no phone and to top it all off, she was in pajamas.
Great stupid now what?? Well it’s not too late to turn around and go back. “Chyrstal? Where are you?” she heard Gabriel yelling. He walked out the door. “There you are. What are you doing?”She looked at the ground. “Well I was trying to leave, you know, so I can keep you safe, cause I don’t want to lose you, but then I realized you have my phone, I have no money, and I’m in pajamas.”
Then he gently pulled her by her hand back upstairs to his room.
He took her to the door he had went through earlier, and pulled her though it.
“I was getting you clothes before you magically disappeared like that, now it looks like I cant let you out of my sight huh?” he smiled sweetly, to assure her he was joking.
“It’s okay; I think I can behave myself.”
He pulled her close to him, “Look, please please please stop worrying about me. I can take care of myself and you. I told you. Jus give me today to prove it. But no more disappearing stunts okay?”
“Fine. It’s a deal. But jus please, no more kisses?” she asked, trying not to hurt him.
“I try not to make promises I can’t keep.” He said looking at her seriously.
She sighed. “Okay, no promises.”
He turned and started looking through clothes. That’s when she realized she was standing in, possibly the biggest, walk in closet ever. Clothes were everywhere. He handed her a big black button down shirt. “I don’t know about the pants, I can check out my moms stuff, but it might be too big.”
“Okay.”
“I’ll be rite back.” He lent down and pecked her softly on the lips.
As he walked out of the closet, he said “See there would have gone that promise right out the window.”
She laughed.It was quite in the closet; she walked out into his room and started to look around. He had lots of CD’s and a stereo. She picked up Epiphany by T-pain and figured out how to turn on the stereo. 6 CD changers, Cool. She thought and grabbed, Exclusive by Chris Brown.She stuck the two CD’s in and started to play Chris Brown first.
I enjoy you. I never wana see you leave girl. You made my life so completed. I don’t [[I don’t]].
“Wana move to fast, no, cause you’re too specialI really love the way, I do, you make me feel inside.”
She turned around to Gabriel singing. His voice was amazing.
“I may never find another one like you, great choice.” He smiled and walked closer to her.
“I didn’t do it on purpose. I jus picked Chris.”
He laughed a little, then handed her some blue jean shorts. “Here. I think these will fit. Bathrooms over there.” He pointed to another door.
She walked over there, and looked at him.“Is it okay if I take a shower?”
It took him by surprise. “Uh, sure. Give me your clothes and I guess. I’ll have them washed. CEDRIC!”
In about thirty seconds, a man about age sixty-five appeared. “Yes?”
“Hey Cedric, could you please wash her clothes? And get her a towel.”
“Right away sir.”
“Thanks man.”
Chyrstal looked at him in disbelief.
“What? You think we moved into this big house and we clean it? No, my parents don’t even have time to eat dinner let alone make it.”
Chyrstal nodded her head and went to sit on the bed and wait for her towel.“So, tell me, why did you move here?”
He sighed and sat down on the bed with her.
Authors note: hey everyone. Posted it early! So what do you think? Any comments? Please leave them. Tell your friends! 23 votes till the next one! Thank you all for all your support and hope you all had a good holiday!
*J*
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On January 2nd 2008 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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OMG!!! -speechless- There are no words to describe an amazing story...Please keep me posted. |
| On January 2nd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Whoa I love it! Please keep me posted :) |
| On January 2nd 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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dis is dope =]keep meh posted |
| On January 1st 2008 crankdatshit94 Said : | |
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loved it!!!! pleasze keep me posted |
| On January 1st 2008 necrosiss Said : | |
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Thanks for keeping me posted earlyy. :] loving it, keep me posted. |
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ok ok ok ok ok.... ok.... ok ok 0_0 speechless plz plzz plz keep me posted!!! |
| On January 1st 2008 YourSweetie247 Said : | |
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omg...so cute...thanks for letting me know early ;) |
| On January 1st 2008 hglnj94 Said : | |
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omg love it! keep me posted! |
| On January 1st 2008 LonelyReality9 Said : | |
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same here. plz keep me posted |
| On December 31st 2007 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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love it keep me posted |
