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Who Is He?Part 9!!!The End!!!
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Hadie was so exited that she was with Jake that she forgot that it was the 4th of July. Jake Helped Hadie out of the car and led her to a table at the park and took the blindfold off of her. Hadie was surprised to be greeted by her family complimenting her on her new outfit. "You look hot sis!" Yelled one of her brothers as he was hit on the head my her monther. After 5 minuts of talking to her family the fireworks began. "Holy crap! I forgot what day it was!" Yelled Hadie. Jake then took Haie for a walk around the park to get a better view of the dazzling fireworks. Jake sat down with Hadie on the grass "Hadie." said Jake. "Yes?" replied Hadie. Jake then continued "Will you marry me?" There were a few moments of silence before Hadie screamed yes but right as she said yes someone out of sight shot Jake. Everybody rushed Jake to the hospital but it was too late to save him but before Jake died he called Hadie over to him and told her to live a happy life and then he died right in front of her eyes. Hadie then started screaming and shouting his name and told him to wake up, but he never did.
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| On October 18th 2007 LuraJane Said : | |
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i think it was her dad thats soooo sad |
| On October 18th 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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holy shit!! thats a terrible ending. oh my go. i bet that dude killed him, i cant remember his name right now. that is so messes up
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