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My Abusive Father

Creative Created on 5-20-08 Views(106) Story Rating G

 Well the stroy begins with James Doorhold, Thats me. I'm only 14 years old. My mother merried this guy she met over the internet. His name is David longhorn, he is a dronky and he's been in prison at least 5 times. We don't know y he went to prison, but we don't bother asking him.

At first he was a nice guy until he got merried with my mother. One day I woke up for school in the morning. I see my father standing in front of my door with a beer in his hand. He gave me a look that I will never for get. David starting walking towards me, he begins to lift his arms up and he hit me. After the hit he started beating me with his fist. I screamed for my mother, I got no answer.

I went to school with some bruse marks. The teachers ask how I did I get those bruse marks. I answered, I fell down the stairs on my way to school. But I couldn't tell her, cause if I did my father would beat me even harder. 

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On July 26th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 its pretty good keep going
On May 21st 2008 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic More detail, better grammar and spelling. I just cant read things with "y" and things like that...
On May 20th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox you should do a spell check and check the grammer some.
On May 20th 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae kmpp
On May 20th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp
On May 20th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp
On May 20th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott wow u could KMPP
On May 20th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh wow but add more detail..like in the look and how did he/she know that the father would beat him/her even harder?kmp