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Tragedy Created on 3-4-08 Views(65) Story Rating G

It was 3 days away from Ricky,Ricky was very excited and he couldnt wait.Ricky was getting his stuff ready for his 10th birthday party.2 more days before his birthday and he keeps wishing he gets a game like Diego and Edgar have.Ricky doesnt have alot of friends because everytime he makes a friend,Edgar always steal them by giving them stuff.Ricky was always a push over in school and he gets beat up in school but he never told on them,he just say to the teacher"I tripped".Everyday when Ricky goes home and his parents ask he just smiles and says"I had a great day"but his parents didnt really care about him.When Ricky gets into his room he locks the door and he cries.Ricky is always sensitive and he never can hurt anyone. Ricky's birthday comes,he was soo excited when he woke up.But when he got downstairs he didnt see any decorations,he felt really sad.He asked his parents if theres gonna be a part but the parents asked why and Ricky just said nevermind.Ricky felt bad but when he got to his school his friends threw him a party.His friends was Johnathan,Monica,Justin,Britney and Rachel,and Diego was even there.Diego bought him a cake.

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On March 4th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 kmp please... just a word of advice-- One: add more details Two: make them longer Three: slow down a bit... other than that fairly good
On March 4th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said :
13sweetcheeks kmp
On March 4th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX That is really sad! If you're going to adopt a kid atleast know when their birthday is, and care about them Jeez! Please keep me posted.
On March 4th 2008 mysticaxxstar Said :
mysticaxxstar =( thats sad..