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Morning slapped me like a wet towel. With the alarm clock going off constantly, brothers and sisters fighting over the bathroom, and my mom banging on my door telling me to get up. I groaned sitting up realizing I had a big urge to sleep the whole day. I blinked, looking around my tittered-tattered room. Last night was one of the worse nights, I couldn’t sleep due to the event that happened yesterday. Valentines Day. The day of “Love” as everyone calls it. To me it was such a bother, the worry of getting rejected or hooking up with someone or you being the one to reject someone. Being a sophomore who’s never experienced feelings for a guy, I really didn’t care about Valentines day. I totally forgot about it till I walked into the halls and saw pink, red, and white hearts everywhere, but that’s not what made my day so hellish. Apparently, I had a secret admirer. Yup, a guy had the hots for me, Rose Amunda, which I found unbelievable. I never found myself attractive or special, just a normal girl trying to get by in life. I didn’t have best friends, only acquaintances. This wasn’t a normal secret admirer, normal secret admirers would give a card confessing, a rose, or candy. My secret admirer did the works! In every six classes, laying on top of every desk I sat in those six classes was a small crystal-floral bottle and within the bottle was the liquid scent I used everyday and within the liquid hid a glass chamber contained a love note. I didn’t just get one of these lovely presents. Like I said six classes, six bottles, and six varieties of love notes. I liked the label on it at least, since part of my name was used and some other words in a different language wrapped the front of the bottle. Most girls would think it was extremely sweet for a guy to go out of his way and do this for you but I found it really creepy because I knew for a fact I wasn’t close to any guys. I was acquaintances with them but nothing more. I wasn’t even sure if it was a guy! If its not a guy and I find out, I’m transferring schools. All night the thought of figuring out who it was bothered me which led to the fact on why I was tired today. Finally getting up, I got ready for school. As I fixed my hair, standing in front of my nightstand mirror I glance down at the bottles and notes laying on the copper-wood surface. In every note it did say “P.S. We’ll eventually meet and I’ll tell you, till then wait for me” but meeting that person could be years from now for all I knew. I wanted to know now! Speeding out the front door to school, I held my binder in my right arm and my shoulder backpack slouched on my left thigh. I sighed with relief as I noticed some students walking as well.
The chill of the morning felt good with the welcoming of the sun’s rays coming up from behind the mountains. I took a deep breath, an in-take of fresh, crisp air filled my lungs. Passing a few backyards, dogs barking here and there, I could see the forest trail up ahead that led to my school. Staring at my feet as I walked at a slow pace, I quickly glanced up. I had that a-stalker-is-watching-you feeling, I shuddered, turned, and spotted my stalker. Only a few feet a way a guy smiled at me as if he was happy that I acknowledge his existence, did I know him? I couldn’t make out his features but he suddenly started running towards me. Me being me, I freaked and ran for it as fast as I could. The thickness of the trees made it seem like one huge tree racing me to the edge of the forest to my school. Not slowing down, I glanced back seeing him gone. For the second time that morning relief washed over me. It sort of felt good to run at this speed. As I turned forward, I couldn’t stop myself from slamming into the guy that was ahead of me. And heh NO! that was NOT the worse part! When I slammed into him our stuff fell, and just to make the moment more “fun” there was a freakin dirt hill on the right of us with my speed and mass it caused both of us to tumble down the dirt hill and for the finale I was in his face with my ass. Charming way to say, “Good Morning” don’t you think? Horrified I scrambled off of him, dusting myself off.
I stared down at him with an apologetic look, “I’m really so sorry! So, so, so, so, sorry! I wasn’t paying attention when I was running and it was like you appeared out of no where!” I frantically tried to get him to believe me.
He didn’t.
“How can you not notice a six foot five guy in front of you?” he asked, a hint of anger in his voice.
“Crap, crap, crap he’s pissed!” I thought, gulping. I deserved to be yelled at, I guess, “I really don’t know but it was an accident, I swear!” I said, plastering my hands together raising them for forgiveness, “I barely know this dude, why am I pleading for forgiveness?” I wondered, I kept them up anyways to block the sunlight from my eyes.
He sighed staring at me for a moment, ”Aren’t you in my English class?” he asked as he stood up, his tall, lean body blocking off the sunlight that was shining in my face.
Lowering my hands I observed him more closely, “Uh, sure, if I say yes will you forgive me?” I questioned and added a small smile.
He laughed and shook his head, “How could I forget you? You’re the clueless girl who sits three seats in front of me, Mr. Loober loves to pick on you, I guess you’re clueless both in class and out” he said teasingly.
I decided to keep talking to him, so he would forget this little incident and hopefully not press charges if he has any injuries. We both were up, had our stuff, and continued walking to school. Soon enough I found out his name was Damien Pratts and he was in my English class, he was on the wrestling team, and his favorite hobby is baking dangerous deserts. I realized as I talked to him more, the more I let the I-need-to-find-out-who-my-secret-admirer-is thing go. That whole day we hung out with each other when we could. Since Damien had an A+ in Mr. Loober’s English Class I requested to sit next to him for the rest of the year so he could tutor me. Days passed, then weeks, then months. We became inseperateable. I loved every minute I spent with him. He was the first guy to make me laugh, blush, smile, and choke all at the same time. You try doing that, its not easy or fun, unless it you were with him. I grew closer and closer to him, wanting to be near him all the time. I couldn’t explain how I felt anymore because I never experienced these feelings for anyone of the opposite sex. I never found out who my secret admirer was but I did use his present, it became my favorite signature scent and having six bottles, it will last for awhile. Plus I only started wearing it because Damien said he liked it on me. So I thought, “Why not, can’t let the perfume go to waste, right?“. Before I knew it we were Seniors graduating High School and before I knew it, I was in love with Damien Pratts.
For fun on our second to last day before school ended and before graduation he persuaded me to ditch school with him, so we did. We decided to re-visit the spot where we originally met. Sitting on the side-walk above the dirt hill with our feet resting in the soil of the hill, we were both leaning back using our arms for support to hold us up. It was quiet till he spoke.
“You know, I was really pissed that a girl had her ass in my face, I never expected that to happen” he said, grinning over at me making me feel guilty all over again.
“Well, a lot of guys would feel lucky if I had my ass in their face! You should feel honored” I said teasing him. Smirking, I sat up folding my arms over my chest, “You know what, Damien?” I asked turning to him.
He sat up also dusting his hands, ”What?” he shifted his feet to turn fully to me as I did to him.
“We wouldn’t be here today if it wasn’t for this stalker guy chasing after me that day we met, if he didn’t chase me I wouldn’t of ran and if I didn’t run I wouldn’t of ran into you” I explained, laughing a bit, “Weird how life is, huh? So I guess I have to thank my stalker for this” I stared at him, waiting for a response but he was just grinning down at the side-walk.
He stretched his long, muscular arms reminding me of the hugs he’d give me. The way our bare arms would touch on those summer days, his thick brown hair slicked back, his ivory skin radiating warmth. We’d walk around the neighborhoods just talking and laughing. Now we were entering the real world, going off to college and starting a new beginning of our lives.
Snapping out of my day dream, he still hadn’t responded. I sighed, purposefully making it sound like I was getting impatient, “Damien, are you ok?” I asked, shaking his shoulder a little. He made it seem like I snapped him out of a day dream as well. He smiled at me and nodded his head.
I smiled back and stood up stretching, “Lets go get something to eat, its right about lunch at school and you’re making me miss it so you’re buying me food” as I started to walk in the direction of our town I felt his hand suddenly grasping my wrist, “Wait, before we go, I have a confession” he said, a serious look in his soft brown eyes.
I stopped and nodded, “Um, ok, sure, what is it?” I asked turning into serious mode too.
Letting go of my wrist, he let out a long sigh, blinked and captured my gaze. “He’s so hot when he’s serious!” I thought, blushing, “If he confesses whatever he’s going to confess I should confess my feelings for him also, not going to get another chance like this”
He began to speak in a low tone, “Can you think back a little and remember a secret admirer you had on Valentines day, Sophomore year?” he asked me as I kept blinking absent-mindedly at him.
I nodded my head.
“Can you remember anything about your stalker?” he asked, I knew he was on to something.
I shook my head.
“What would you say if I knew who your secret admirer and who your stalker was?” he asked as my eyes got wider.
“Do you know?” I asked, getting interested, inching closer to him.
He smiled with his teeth showing, I never noticed how great his smiles were, made me feel damn lucky to be in his presence, “Well what would you do for me if I said I did?”
I shrugged my shoulders, “I don’t know, what do you want?”
He kept his smile, “I want you to kiss me” he plain out said that to me! I was about to go into petrified shock till he took a few baby steps towards me, scuffing his white sneakers against the dusty side-walk.
I smiled back at this, kissing him was something I wanted to do for so long anyways but I didn’t show my desire for it, “Fine, I’ll kiss you if you tell me who my stalker and secret admirers are and you have to tell me right after, you swear?” this deal wouldn’t even matter, I just wanted the kiss!
He nodded his head, “I swear I’ll tell you right after” I didn’t even notice it but I was sort of sliding towards him, not picking up my feet like I was in a trance. I couldn’t show him how badly I wanted this kiss.
I rested my arms to my side, looking up at him as I stood close enough to him that I could feel his shirt against my cheeks if I moved at least two centimeters. He gently held my shoulders with both hands and leaned down, planting a soft warm kiss that sent a shock of excitement all throughout my body. Making me feel tingly and jumpy, I wanted more so I deepened it a little then he pulled away and said, “Me”
I stared at him confused, “What did he mean by me? Wait…he was my secret admirer? AND stalker?” my mind tried to absorb all this but I didn’t even have a clue he was both of them. How could I not tell? I started laughing so hard I used him as support then calmed down, “Wow, I guess you are right, I am as clueless inside and outside of Mr. Loober’s class” he started to laugh also and asked, “You aren’t mad at me for keeping it a secret?” he asked, a confused expression appearing on his face.
Shaking my head once to the left and once to the right, I pulled him into a hug, “I’m actually glad”
He hugged me back, wrapping his arms around my waist, “My beautiful Rose, Ti Amo” I remembered it off my bottle of perfume he gave me. Smiling brightly I asked, “What does that mean?”
He kissed my temple the down my neck and back up, brushing his nose to the spot next to my ear, “My beautiful Rose, I love you” with that said I kissed him again. I let myself go and enjoyed being with him. It was weird how all of this turned out but its worth it in the end.
The chill of the morning felt good with the welcoming of the sun’s rays coming up from behind the mountains. I took a deep breath, an in-take of fresh, crisp air filled my lungs. Passing a few backyards, dogs barking here and there, I could see the forest trail up ahead that led to my school. Staring at my feet as I walked at a slow pace, I quickly glanced up. I had that a-stalker-is-watching-you feeling, I shuddered, turned, and spotted my stalker. Only a few feet a way a guy smiled at me as if he was happy that I acknowledge his existence, did I know him? I couldn’t make out his features but he suddenly started running towards me. Me being me, I freaked and ran for it as fast as I could. The thickness of the trees made it seem like one huge tree racing me to the edge of the forest to my school. Not slowing down, I glanced back seeing him gone. For the second time that morning relief washed over me. It sort of felt good to run at this speed. As I turned forward, I couldn’t stop myself from slamming into the guy that was ahead of me. And heh NO! that was NOT the worse part! When I slammed into him our stuff fell, and just to make the moment more “fun” there was a freakin dirt hill on the right of us with my speed and mass it caused both of us to tumble down the dirt hill and for the finale I was in his face with my ass. Charming way to say, “Good Morning” don’t you think? Horrified I scrambled off of him, dusting myself off.
I stared down at him with an apologetic look, “I’m really so sorry! So, so, so, so, sorry! I wasn’t paying attention when I was running and it was like you appeared out of no where!” I frantically tried to get him to believe me.
He didn’t.
“How can you not notice a six foot five guy in front of you?” he asked, a hint of anger in his voice.
“Crap, crap, crap he’s pissed!” I thought, gulping. I deserved to be yelled at, I guess, “I really don’t know but it was an accident, I swear!” I said, plastering my hands together raising them for forgiveness, “I barely know this dude, why am I pleading for forgiveness?” I wondered, I kept them up anyways to block the sunlight from my eyes.
He sighed staring at me for a moment, ”Aren’t you in my English class?” he asked as he stood up, his tall, lean body blocking off the sunlight that was shining in my face.
Lowering my hands I observed him more closely, “Uh, sure, if I say yes will you forgive me?” I questioned and added a small smile.
He laughed and shook his head, “How could I forget you? You’re the clueless girl who sits three seats in front of me, Mr. Loober loves to pick on you, I guess you’re clueless both in class and out” he said teasingly.
I decided to keep talking to him, so he would forget this little incident and hopefully not press charges if he has any injuries. We both were up, had our stuff, and continued walking to school. Soon enough I found out his name was Damien Pratts and he was in my English class, he was on the wrestling team, and his favorite hobby is baking dangerous deserts. I realized as I talked to him more, the more I let the I-need-to-find-out-who-my-secret-admirer-is thing go. That whole day we hung out with each other when we could. Since Damien had an A+ in Mr. Loober’s English Class I requested to sit next to him for the rest of the year so he could tutor me. Days passed, then weeks, then months. We became inseperateable. I loved every minute I spent with him. He was the first guy to make me laugh, blush, smile, and choke all at the same time. You try doing that, its not easy or fun, unless it you were with him. I grew closer and closer to him, wanting to be near him all the time. I couldn’t explain how I felt anymore because I never experienced these feelings for anyone of the opposite sex. I never found out who my secret admirer was but I did use his present, it became my favorite signature scent and having six bottles, it will last for awhile. Plus I only started wearing it because Damien said he liked it on me. So I thought, “Why not, can’t let the perfume go to waste, right?“. Before I knew it we were Seniors graduating High School and before I knew it, I was in love with Damien Pratts.
For fun on our second to last day before school ended and before graduation he persuaded me to ditch school with him, so we did. We decided to re-visit the spot where we originally met. Sitting on the side-walk above the dirt hill with our feet resting in the soil of the hill, we were both leaning back using our arms for support to hold us up. It was quiet till he spoke.
“You know, I was really pissed that a girl had her ass in my face, I never expected that to happen” he said, grinning over at me making me feel guilty all over again.
“Well, a lot of guys would feel lucky if I had my ass in their face! You should feel honored” I said teasing him. Smirking, I sat up folding my arms over my chest, “You know what, Damien?” I asked turning to him.
He sat up also dusting his hands, ”What?” he shifted his feet to turn fully to me as I did to him.
“We wouldn’t be here today if it wasn’t for this stalker guy chasing after me that day we met, if he didn’t chase me I wouldn’t of ran and if I didn’t run I wouldn’t of ran into you” I explained, laughing a bit, “Weird how life is, huh? So I guess I have to thank my stalker for this” I stared at him, waiting for a response but he was just grinning down at the side-walk.
He stretched his long, muscular arms reminding me of the hugs he’d give me. The way our bare arms would touch on those summer days, his thick brown hair slicked back, his ivory skin radiating warmth. We’d walk around the neighborhoods just talking and laughing. Now we were entering the real world, going off to college and starting a new beginning of our lives.
Snapping out of my day dream, he still hadn’t responded. I sighed, purposefully making it sound like I was getting impatient, “Damien, are you ok?” I asked, shaking his shoulder a little. He made it seem like I snapped him out of a day dream as well. He smiled at me and nodded his head.
I smiled back and stood up stretching, “Lets go get something to eat, its right about lunch at school and you’re making me miss it so you’re buying me food” as I started to walk in the direction of our town I felt his hand suddenly grasping my wrist, “Wait, before we go, I have a confession” he said, a serious look in his soft brown eyes.
I stopped and nodded, “Um, ok, sure, what is it?” I asked turning into serious mode too.
Letting go of my wrist, he let out a long sigh, blinked and captured my gaze. “He’s so hot when he’s serious!” I thought, blushing, “If he confesses whatever he’s going to confess I should confess my feelings for him also, not going to get another chance like this”
He began to speak in a low tone, “Can you think back a little and remember a secret admirer you had on Valentines day, Sophomore year?” he asked me as I kept blinking absent-mindedly at him.
I nodded my head.
“Can you remember anything about your stalker?” he asked, I knew he was on to something.
I shook my head.
“What would you say if I knew who your secret admirer and who your stalker was?” he asked as my eyes got wider.
“Do you know?” I asked, getting interested, inching closer to him.
He smiled with his teeth showing, I never noticed how great his smiles were, made me feel damn lucky to be in his presence, “Well what would you do for me if I said I did?”
I shrugged my shoulders, “I don’t know, what do you want?”
He kept his smile, “I want you to kiss me” he plain out said that to me! I was about to go into petrified shock till he took a few baby steps towards me, scuffing his white sneakers against the dusty side-walk.
I smiled back at this, kissing him was something I wanted to do for so long anyways but I didn’t show my desire for it, “Fine, I’ll kiss you if you tell me who my stalker and secret admirers are and you have to tell me right after, you swear?” this deal wouldn’t even matter, I just wanted the kiss!
He nodded his head, “I swear I’ll tell you right after” I didn’t even notice it but I was sort of sliding towards him, not picking up my feet like I was in a trance. I couldn’t show him how badly I wanted this kiss.
I rested my arms to my side, looking up at him as I stood close enough to him that I could feel his shirt against my cheeks if I moved at least two centimeters. He gently held my shoulders with both hands and leaned down, planting a soft warm kiss that sent a shock of excitement all throughout my body. Making me feel tingly and jumpy, I wanted more so I deepened it a little then he pulled away and said, “Me”
I stared at him confused, “What did he mean by me? Wait…he was my secret admirer? AND stalker?” my mind tried to absorb all this but I didn’t even have a clue he was both of them. How could I not tell? I started laughing so hard I used him as support then calmed down, “Wow, I guess you are right, I am as clueless inside and outside of Mr. Loober’s class” he started to laugh also and asked, “You aren’t mad at me for keeping it a secret?” he asked, a confused expression appearing on his face.
Shaking my head once to the left and once to the right, I pulled him into a hug, “I’m actually glad”
He hugged me back, wrapping his arms around my waist, “My beautiful Rose, Ti Amo” I remembered it off my bottle of perfume he gave me. Smiling brightly I asked, “What does that mean?”
He kissed my temple the down my neck and back up, brushing his nose to the spot next to my ear, “My beautiful Rose, I love you” with that said I kissed him again. I let myself go and enjoyed being with him. It was weird how all of this turned out but its worth it in the end.
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