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The Thing In My Closet

Creative Created on 5-12-07 Views(113) Story Rating G
The Thing In My Closet

(tap) (tap) (tap) Hun what. (tap) (tap) (tap) What is that. There something in my closet. Sundenly things stared to shift and fall. I pull my blaket to my face. Leaving only my eyes to be seen. (tap) (tap) (tap) there it is agine only lounder this time. What could it be. Is it simply a rat in the wall. Or something far Whorst. Now I can hear something brething. (tap) (tap) (tap) Is it a monster.The door open a littel bit. There's the noise agine fellow by scahating this time. (tap) (tap) (tap) (scatch) The noise sonds loder this time. It seems as if the taping is rythm with my heartbeet. I think I can see a yellow dot. Maybe its an eye. I can just imagen it. BId balck,long claws that he useds to peel the skin from your flesh. Robes that are all cut up and drity. Yellow eyes that wood make your heart stop. Theeth so sharp that they could cut thouth a car with out a probem. A monster that eats like a cow. (tap) (scatch) (tap) (scatch) (tap) (scatch) It seems as if the sond was in my head. Because srely my mom and dad can hear it. the noise is so lond it seems like my head is going to blow up. I have to see what it is. I pull the blaket off me. I stand up. Take a deep breth. Hear i go is this it. I cant hear the noise any more. Im about a foot away. I perseed with cotion. What is in side. I grap the door slowly pull it open. I trune on the closet light. BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I jump out off the way. My baseballbat fell to the fool. My heart skip a beet. Slowly my heart stops racing. Sundenly I could feel somethings breth on my neck. Then drool fell on my sholder. I slowy trune arond. There was the monster. It stood as tall as me. Sundely it jump at me. What do I do is this it.

 

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On May 30th 2007 stitchchick92 Said: 
stitchchick92 thats good
On May 20th 2007 dark013angel Said: 
dark013angel lol interesting...i like it tho
On May 12th 2007 1luv1hartbrek Said: 
1luv1hartbrek You might need to check your spelling or is it supposed to be like that?? Otherwise it's good.
On May 12th 2007 LoveOfTheSouth Said: 
LoveOfTheSouth eh.... i like the suspense!