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The Note In Her Pocket..
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 Created on 7-30-07
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Boy: Baby, we need to talk.
Girl: Ricardo, what do u mean?
Boy: Something has come up...
Girl: What? What's wrong? Is it bad?
Boy: I don't want to hurt you, baby.
Girl: *Thinks* Oh my God, I hope he doesn’t break up with me... I love him so much.
Boy: Baby, are you there??
Girl: Yeah, I'm here. What is so important??
Boy: I'm not sure if I should say it..
Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please just tell me.
Boy: I'm leaving...
Girl: Baby, what are u talking about?? I don't want you to leave me, I love you.
Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away.
Girl: Why? All of your family lives over here.
Boy: Well, my father is sending me away to a boarding school far
away.
Girl: I can't believe this.
[FATHER: (Picks up the other phone, interrupts & yells furiously
ZOEY!, what did I tell you about talking to boys?!!!... Get off the damn phone!! (And hangs up).]
Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad.
Girl: You know how he gets, but anyways, I don’t want you to go.
Boy: Would you run away with me?
Girl: Baby, you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't... You don't know what would happen if I did. My dad would kill me!
Boy: *Sad* It's okay.. I understand, I guess..
Girl: *Thinking*I can't believe what's going on.
Boy: I need to give you something tonight , because I am leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I need to see you now.
Girl: Okay, I will sneak out & meet you at the park.
Boy: Okay, I'll meet you there in 20 minutes.
[They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.]
Boy: Here you go, this is for you. I gotta go.
Girl: *Tear* (Begins to cry.)
Boy: Baby, dont cry, you know I love you... But I have to go.
Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away.)
[They both go back home. And Zoey begins to read the letter he gave her]
It says...
"Zoey,
You probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a letter explaining the truth about how much I care about you. The truth is, is that I never loved you, I hated you so much, you are my bitch and dont you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you, and be around you. You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you, loser. You never did the right thing, and you were never there. I didn’t think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before, I never want to cuddle up, how we used to. I will not miss you and that's a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to remember that. Loser, you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me. Why, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon loser... Goodbye.
- Ricardo"
[ Zoey begins to cry, she throws the paper in that garbage cry’s for hours ]
... A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely... Then she gets a phone call....
Friend: How are you feeling?
Girl: I just cant believe this happened.. I thought he loved me.
Friend: Oh, about that. Ricardo left me a message. A few days ago. He told me to tell you to look in your jacket pocket or something...
Girl: Umm.. okay.
[She finds a piece of paper in the jacket,
It says:
"Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter. I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words...
Hate = Love
Never = Always
Loser = Baby
Will not= will
Bitch=Everything
.... I hope you didn't take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go that’s why I wanted you to run away with me...
-Ricardo"]
Girl: Oh my God! It's a letter.. Ricardo does love me!!, he must of
slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!!
Friend: lol Okay but I g2g... Call me later.
Girl: *happy*okay, bye, I'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me!
... Zoey turns the T.V. on......
[Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died,
>we are still searching for survivors... This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80... it was on its way to an all boys boarding school..." the Reporter says.
[ She turns off the t.v. ... 3 days later, she kills herself,
because of the fact that Ricardo was dead & she had nothing to live for... ]
... A day after that the phone rings. Nobody answers. It was
Ricardo, he called to leave a message. "Its Ricardo, I guess you're not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight because I had to see you one last time. So, I hope your not worried. I am staying for good..
Girl: Ricardo, what do u mean?
Boy: Something has come up...
Girl: What? What's wrong? Is it bad?
Boy: I don't want to hurt you, baby.
Girl: *Thinks* Oh my God, I hope he doesn’t break up with me... I love him so much.
Boy: Baby, are you there??
Girl: Yeah, I'm here. What is so important??
Boy: I'm not sure if I should say it..
Girl: Well, you already brought it up, so please just tell me.
Boy: I'm leaving...
Girl: Baby, what are u talking about?? I don't want you to leave me, I love you.
Boy: Not like that, I mean I'm moving far away.
Girl: Why? All of your family lives over here.
Boy: Well, my father is sending me away to a boarding school far
away.
Girl: I can't believe this.
[FATHER: (Picks up the other phone, interrupts & yells furiously
ZOEY!, what did I tell you about talking to boys?!!!... Get off the damn phone!! (And hangs up).]
Boy: Wow, your father sounds really mad.
Girl: You know how he gets, but anyways, I don’t want you to go.
Boy: Would you run away with me?
Girl: Baby, you know I would, I would do anything for you, but I can't... You don't know what would happen if I did. My dad would kill me!
Boy: *Sad* It's okay.. I understand, I guess..
Girl: *Thinking*I can't believe what's going on.
Boy: I need to give you something tonight , because I am leaving on flight 1-80 in the morning, so I need to see you now.
Girl: Okay, I will sneak out & meet you at the park.
Boy: Okay, I'll meet you there in 20 minutes.
[They meet at a nearby park, they both hug eachother. And he gives her a note.]
Boy: Here you go, this is for you. I gotta go.
Girl: *Tear* (Begins to cry.)
Boy: Baby, dont cry, you know I love you... But I have to go.
Girl: Okay (Begins to walk away.)
[They both go back home. And Zoey begins to read the letter he gave her]
It says...
"Zoey,
You probably already know that I'm leaving, I knew this would be better if I wrote a letter explaining the truth about how much I care about you. The truth is, is that I never loved you, I hated you so much, you are my bitch and dont you ever forget that. I never cared about you, and never wanted to talk to you, and be around you. You really have no clue how much I hate you. Now that I'm leaving I thought you should know that I hate you, loser. You never did the right thing, and you were never there. I didn’t think I could hate someone as much as I hate you. And I never want to see you, for the rest of my life, I will never miss kissing you like before, I never want to cuddle up, how we used to. I will not miss you and that's a promise. You never had my love, and I want you to remember that. Loser, you keep this letter because this may be the last thing you have from me. Why, I hate you so much. I will not talk to you soon loser... Goodbye.
- Ricardo"
[ Zoey begins to cry, she throws the paper in that garbage cry’s for hours ]
... A day passes, she is sad, depressed and she feels so lonely... Then she gets a phone call....
Friend: How are you feeling?
Girl: I just cant believe this happened.. I thought he loved me.
Friend: Oh, about that. Ricardo left me a message. A few days ago. He told me to tell you to look in your jacket pocket or something...
Girl: Umm.. okay.
[She finds a piece of paper in the jacket,
It says:
"Baby I hope you find this before you read my letter. I knew your dad might read it, so I switched a few words...
Hate = Love
Never = Always
Loser = Baby
Will not= will
Bitch=Everything
.... I hope you didn't take that seriously because I love you with all my heart, and it was so hard to let you go that’s why I wanted you to run away with me...
-Ricardo"]
Girl: Oh my God! It's a letter.. Ricardo does love me!!, he must of
slipped it into my pocket when he hugged me. I can't believe how stupid I am!!
Friend: lol Okay but I g2g... Call me later.
Girl: *happy*okay, bye, I'll be at home waiting for my baby to call me!
... Zoey turns the T.V. on......
[Breaking news] "An airplane has crashed. Over 47 young boys died,
>we are still searching for survivors... This is a tragedy we will never forget, this plane was flight 1-80... it was on its way to an all boys boarding school..." the Reporter says.
[ She turns off the t.v. ... 3 days later, she kills herself,
because of the fact that Ricardo was dead & she had nothing to live for... ]
... A day after that the phone rings. Nobody answers. It was
Ricardo, he called to leave a message. "Its Ricardo, I guess you're not home so, I called to let you know that I'm alive, I missed my flight because I had to see you one last time. So, I hope your not worried. I am staying for good..
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On December 4th 2007 SoraDemon Said : | |
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omg thats so sad i can't stop crying.. which really sucks cause im in the middle of class but damn that was so sad i loved it though it was really great |
| On November 12th 2007 NickyAKAEmiko Said : | |
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OMG!!! THAT IS SO HORRIBLE!!!! I would cry so hard.... |
| On November 11th 2007 cjaskot Said : | |
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awww =( |
| On November 3rd 2007 paramore549 Said : | |
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sad, but really good. |
| On October 13th 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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omg soooo sad |
| On October 3rd 2007 taylorholley Said : | |
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omg. this is SOO good. but its sooo soo so soo soosoo SAD!
its great though |
| On September 11th 2007 SweetDeath26 Said : | |
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Omfg.. That's the sadest thing I've ever read.. *cries* I..I..I just-- I'm really cry. It wa so-so beautiful.. Yet so sad. And..And.. *sighs* Great job. I loved it so much. |
| On September 8th 2007 ilovesnirvana8 Said : | |
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omg thats soooo sad!!!
=(
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*cries* |
| On September 2nd 2007 bloodredangel7 Said : | |
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aww thats so sad! your an awsome writer! |
| On August 27th 2007 Shaniqa07 Said : | |
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Wow! That's terrible! I mean, it's a great story, but it's terrible! That is so sad! I almost cried. You're a great writer though, like romantic tragedies...You should make an alternate ending =] But then again, it would make it more like a fairy tale, cuz life doesn't always have happy endings... |
| On August 2nd 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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OOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! *cries*!!! did u make this up!! omggg if u did..that is SO sad..and horrible..and WAHHHH!!!!! :( |
| On July 31st 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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OMG OMG!!! ='( THATS SOOOO WRONG!! |
| On July 30th 2007 spaz007 Said : | |
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Tears. Ouch. That hurt to read. That was the saddeest thing I've ever read. That was extremely romantic. And sad. You're a good writer. You make me happy =)
-Ella Bella ♥ |
| On July 30th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said : | |
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thts so sad and so not fair!!! why did u make the story ed tht way? |
| On July 30th 2007 monkey892 Said : | |
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omg that made me cry |
| On July 30th 2007 xxSusiee Said : | |
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:O... thats so sad. omg. it made me cry. =[ blahh.. thats probably the saddest thing i ever heard. |
