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Abstract Betrayal

Creative Created on 12-3-06 Views(64) Story Rating G

Two people in a room.  You and I.....I close the door behind me and walk over to where you are.  I  have realized your feint.  I am here to convey to you the importance of my own loyalty....and yours.  I reach up and touch my ear.  I unlatch a button behind it, and the top of my skull raises up.  My eyes never leave yours.  Reaching in my head I pull out a DVD.  This DVD is my memory, my secrets, my self in a disk.  I handed it to you.....Do you remember?  I handed this DVD to you, and what did you do with it?  Did I ever ask anyone but you to watch it?  Did I give you permission to show it to anyone else?  You dare betray ME?  You're words are culpable, and your eyes devoid.  The walls melt around us like a candle that has been burning for hours.  The floor falls out from underneath us one tile at a time.  My eyes turn from blue to  black.  You have no where to go.  No one betrays my trust.  You try to run, for you realize your guilt.  You run in vain.  You are in nothingness. My mind... is impregnable.  I build the walls back up, and rebuild the floor.  I look around. You are no where to be found.  I left you in your nothingness....where you belong. For I do forgive you, it will never be forgotten.  One person in the room.....I close the door and now there is none....

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On December 3rd 2006 keke281 Said :
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