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Out 3

Fiction Created on 3-23-08 Views(39) Story Rating G

 Holding the cellphone I flipped it open, and pressed the numbers 9, 1, 1. I clicked send then held the phone to my ear quickly. BEEP it went confused i looked at the cellphones screen. No connection available. "NO CONNECTION!" I cried beating my fists into the ground.

 "Oh gosh" she cried "What now?" she asked me.

    "We wait, a car is bound to drive by eventually" I paused, "Let me get that off you in the mean time" I said hopping over to the motorcycle. As I leaned down my long hair (long for a guy) was pushed out of my face. I pulled against the motorcycle until it budged.

"Oh my.." she cried.

"What did i hurt you?" i asked pushing the motorcycle off her abdomen.

 "No" she whispered, "Its me Kelly!" she cried, "From when you went to my high school, your name is Jake" A smile went across my face, i didn't even reconize her. When I was in 12th she had been in 10th grade, when i graduated 2 years ago i never saw her again. We hung out a few times, i even asked her out to the prom. Although she had to move and we never got to go. "Oh my Kelly have you gotten beautiful" i smiled.

 "Thanks Jake" she smiled and then her face went white. I confused looked at her, "What is wrong?" i asked her. "J j jake" she stuttered,
"Where did the guy go?" she asked. I turned around and looked over to the ditch, he was gone completely. "NO way!" i cried he couldn't have recovered he looked dead. Even if so how did he just disapear? And not even come to us for help?

 "Maybe he woke up and went for help?" i asked. She just stared at me with confusion. "But there is no one around here" she whispered, "I'm sure he'd would have known that" Struggling to sit up she leaned against me, "Oh i am in so much pain Jake" she cried. More blood seemed to gush out. "Moving the motorcycle off her might of been a bad idea" i thought. "WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO JAKE?" she painfully cried.

 In a split thought i said, "I am going to look for a car passing by, stay here i will flag some one down" She nodded to me and laid down on the cold grass and closed her eyes. I looked to my side where the stick was and pushed down on it so i could stand. "AHHK" i yelped and fell down. 

 "ARE YOU OKAY?" Kelly yelled and i shook my head, "My leg just hurts real bad that is all" i sighed. Trying again i held the stick and pushed against it to stand up. I held it close to my side as if  it were a cane. The first step was painful, but by the 5th step i learned to ignore the pain and to keep walking. I climbed back up the ditch, which was painful and dirt got into my wounds. I winced put kept going, i finally reached the road.

 I practically kissed the concerete i was so happy to see it. "Okay God," i thought, "Please send help to aid us" Taking a few steps toward my car i saw the damage done. "I cannot believe i lived through that!" i told myself and shook my head, "God must of blessed me!" I looked into my car, glass was shattered through it, i had to be careful not to cut myself. Reaching under my front seat i found my one and only flare. "This has to do it" i thought.

 Taking out my lighter i lit it, and threw it up into the air. It began to look like a large red fire work and it popped red colors. "Any one who sees this surely will come" I thought, "I hope" I sat on the side of the road and waited for a car passing by. Time could have passed and i wouldn't have known, It was quite boring sitting in one place.

I was about to get up and walk a bit further when i  heard a loud bloody cry from the ditch, "KELLY??" I jumped to my feet...

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On March 24th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter A little hard to understand; I had to re-read several paragraphs before I got them. Just slow it down a bit; and remember that every time the speaker changes a new paragraph starts. And don't forget the commas after the quotation marks :) kmp
On March 24th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 kmp plz