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Current day
Twelve struck midnight and the sky was as dark as ever. The only light was of the distant moon's glow. The moon was full, and those who believe in horror stories would of been chilled. Dark gray clouds that were nearly visible hovered above in the sky. The clouds form could have been mistaken for a spirit form. Ever few minutes or so a large bolt of lightning would strike, and thunder would follow. Trees would bend and creak along with the strong intense wind that was a result of a storm brewing.
For a split second the wind picked up a large gust of leafs and swirled around in a strong swirl. The howls of the wind grew louder and trees shook with all the winds might. Then the form of a baby started to appear on the ground, then the wind died down a bit and the baby laid there. The baby let out a cry, the cry was loud, and it echoed. Meanwhile a farmer who was trying to sleep awoke. "Emma do you hear that?" he said shaking his wife.
"Hear what Roy?" she moaned rolling over and grabbing a pillow. "Listen!" he said shaking her and she opened her eyes and listened. Through their open wind, and despite the wind, the distant cry of a baby could be heard. "Oh Roy its a baby!" Emma cried to her husband. "Its midnight though, why would a baby be alone outside?" he asked her and she just stared. "Go check it out Roy," Emma whispered. "Why?" Roy said nervous, "what if its a prank?" She rolled her eyes, "ROY!" He sighed and pulled off the covers.
He stepped onto the floor and walked over to his boots. He put them on one by one, yawned, and walked to the front door. He grabbed a flash light sitting on a shelf beside his door and flicked it on. Unlocking the door he pushed it open and walked ahead towards the cries. The wind had the taste of sand, as if they were near a beach or some where sandy. "Odd" he whispered but thought nothing of it. Roy shined the light on the area in which he heard the cry. To his amazement, a child laid on the ground bundled up in a golden cloth.
Rushing up to the baby he sat down the flash light. Picking it up he held it tight incase it was cold. "Wheres your mommy?" he whispered although the baby was too young to talk. He wiped some sand away from it's eyes. The baby was a girl. Unrapping the cloth a bit he saw that the baby was adorned with pure gold jewlery. "Oh my!" he exclaimed, "What baby would have this much gold?" Picking up the flash light he looked all around, the abandoned baby had no parents in site.
In those few seconds he decided what to do...
(Back in past)
The woman sat agaisnt the golden pyramid and smiled to her self. In her heart she felt a warmth, she knew her baby girl was in good hands. She tucked a strand of her long black hair behind her ear and stood up as the approaching men found her. They were the King's guards, "Wheres the baby!" they asked. "I don't know," she said. "The King demands an answer Kamila!" one gaurd said. "Don't worry," the Woman whispered. "Tell the king his wife took care of her" she said pretending that she killed it.
Hint: The king was angered that they had a daughter and not a son, so he was going to kill the baby princess. The queen couldn't stand to let her kill their baby. So she ran off to the near by pyramids and decided to call on the sands of time to save her baby. She said an ancient call to the sands of time to take her child to another time in the future, where it would be safe. Little did that baby know when she grew up, just how important and strange she was...
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| On February 27th 2008 piggywiggy2 Said : | |
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I dont get it
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| On February 22nd 2008 CrunkkxPunkk Said : | |
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Wicked. :D Good detail. |
| On February 22nd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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It's pretty cool; the ending paragraph was a tiny confusing but I love the story line! PLEASE keep me posted! |
| On February 22nd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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um "shined" isn't a word. it's "shone" :) |
| On February 22nd 2008 LadyCha0s Said : | |
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kmp!! love ne thing egypt..awesome. |
| On February 22nd 2008 PrettyPistol89 Said : | |
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hmmmmm how far in time did she really get sent to? |
| On February 21st 2008 ShiningKanin Said : | |
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hmmm.. sounds interesting! keep me posted please! |
| On February 21st 2008 gikmo9 Said : | |
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i like it. it has a twist to it that makes it keep ur attention. |


