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Sent away -intro-

Fiction Created on 2-21-08 Views(62) Story Rating G

 A woman ran quickly with a bundle baby held tightly against her, shielding it's eyes from the surrounding sand. Her gold bangles echoed as she ran and her long black hair blew widely around her face. Yells of men were following her, she struggled to find a hiding place. "Quiet my darling" she whispered to the crying baby in a foreign language. She snuggled it as she ran to a hiding place.

 She sat down quietly against a tall golden pyramid. Foot steps were approaching near by and each step closer was ever more frightening. The killer shrieks of the men grew louder and she was left with only one more choice. Kissing the babies head one last time she uttered a quite spell. " Oh sands of time, spare this child's life and send it to another time" she said in her language.  The sand storm grew stronger and the men shielded their eyes. The sand rapped around the woman and the baby and pulled the baby from her arms. Then all was calm, and the child was gone..

 

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On February 22nd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter That is really cool! Since it's an intro I guess it can be short... lol
On February 22nd 2008 valerie1414 Said :
valerie1414 i love this story!!!!!!!
On February 22nd 2008 PrettyPistol89 Said :
PrettyPistol89 Awww poor baby went bye bye
On February 22nd 2008 piggywiggy2 Said :
piggywiggy2 that is a good story
On February 21st 2008 joejoh Said :
joejoh very good! keep writing!
On February 21st 2008 CrunkkxPunkk Said :
CrunkkxPunkk Its wicked. But you should explian in detail more. Use all five sense's it really makes the story! :] Oh and new chapters of freak! Are up. Rcc! Thx
On February 21st 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s sweet kmp.