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Discovering the unknown |
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Love thy Neighbor |
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Out 3 |
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Out |
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Sent Away 2 |
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Sent away -intro- |
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Bloody world intro |
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Keeper of Keed |
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Candy Cane |
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Their lot |
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A strangers Life |
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A strangers life |
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Secretz 5.1 |
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Secretz |
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Dereck: Good morning sunshine (climbs onto top bunk)
Julie: STOP DON'T YOU DARE TICKLE ME!
Dereck: (TICKLES HER) What did you say Julie hmm?
Julie: Alright please stop tickling me! (laughs hard)
Dereck: Okay, okay so what you wanna do today?
Julie: (Ponders for a second) How about we go out to eat then play basket ball?
Dereck: Sounds good, coach does want me to practice.
Julie: Then its settled, i'll be over soon, i gotta change.
Julie begins to climb down from bunk bed when Travis walks in.
Travis: Whats going on!?
Julie: Nothing whats it to you???
Travis: So your banging my girl friend dereck!!???
Dereck: NO! She just slept over idiot,
Julie: And i am not your girl any more Travis!
Dereck: Her parents were fighting so she came over here got a problem? (closes his fists and walks up to Travis)
Travis: Why i..... (his parents walk by)
Mom: Travis come help me with the dishes
Travis gets angry and storms out,
Travis: We'll finish this later.........
Julie looks at Dereck and sighs so does Dereck.
Julie: I am glad i am not with him any more! (Laughs and climbs out window)
Short time later she comes back dressed and Dereck and Julie begin to walk to the dinner down the street. It was called the Fahao dinner, named after the owner that Julie knew. He was nice and gave them a big discount.
Fahao: Hello my favorite customer, What is it the usual?
Julie: For me, yes but instead of orange juice i'd like a Coke?
Fahao: Sure thing sweety, so your dating Travis twin bro now?
Dereck and her blush but both say at the same time-
Both: NO were just friends
Fahao: Sure okay, so same for him?
Dereck nodds and the waiter leaves. If only, dereck thought, if only i could be given one chance, to be with Julie.
A while went by and they finished their food, paid the small tab, and left to the park to play basket ball. Julie dribbled the ball beside herself as Dereck would reach over and try to take it from her. They'd laugh, and continue on.
Later on after they'd came back from park and were in Julies room-
(Going to change the format for a little bit)
"Sit by me on the bed silly, not the dirty floor!" Julie laughed at Dereck. "I didn't know you would let me sit by you my Queen" Dereck bowed then took his seat beside her. "You haven't changed a bit sense i first met you years ago." She smiled and started playing with his hair, (it was long.)
" Don't make my hair look too weird now," he laughed and she smacked him. "Sense when do i do that?" Makes a evil grin. "THATS IT MISSY!" tackles her on the bed and tickles her. Julie crys with giggles of laughter and begs him "STOP IT.. IT IT TICKLES!" and finally he stopped and sat up she and him were close to each other.
Julie looked up at Dereck with a sincere look in her eyes, he knew that she too, had a secret. Dereck was about to stand when Julie leaned in and kissed him....
please let me know if you like!
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| On November 22nd 2007 PrettyPistol89 Said : | |
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It was cute, but I'm more of a suspensful person lol |
| On November 22nd 2007 BROKINHEART Said : | |
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YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER! KEEP MY POSTED PLZ! |
| On November 22nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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love it! keep me posted please!
*J* |


