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Discovering the unknown |
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Love thy Neighbor |
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Out 3 |
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Out 2 |
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Out |
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Sent Away 2 |
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Sent away -intro- |
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Bloody world intro |
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Keeper of Keed |
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Candy Cane |
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Their lot |
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A strangers Life |
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A strangers life 2 |
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A strangers life |
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Secretz 5.1 |
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Secretz |
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Julie: Look Dereck, I am sure that you'll be able to pass that test, I am Certain you can do it!
Dereck: But what if i can't Julie? Then all these years of practice will be just wasted time.
Julie walks over and puts a hand on his shoulder, he shakes his head.
Julie: It is never wasted time, when you love something, okay? Just trust me on this. All you have to do is practice basket ball more until coach has the test.
Dereck: I guess you right Julie, Thanks, no wonder my brother loves you so much. (But i love you much more he thought)
Julie: Yeah i guess so, I am just not sure if i like Travis that much any more.
Derecks eyes widened, maybe he would have a chance with her afterall.
Dereck: Why is that Julie?
Julie: He just is not my type, Plus he hangs out with that Brienna hoe to much to just be "friends."
Dereck: Well personally i think you deserve better then my brother Julie, (I would treat you so much better, he thought.)
Julie: Wow, but he is your brother, i am suprised you say that.
Dereck: He hasn't ever been the good brother, he always treats me like shit, and he also went with a girl once, that he knew i loved.
Dereck sat down and Julie sat beside him. The wind was breezy and she rapped her arms around herself to stay warm.
Julie: I am sorry to hear that Dereck, i can't believe Travis would do such a thing. *Shakes head*
Dereck: Well its getting late Julie, Shall i bring you home? *Laughs*
Julie: I live next door, but okay ha ha..
Dereck grabs ahold of her arm and walks her over the lawn. The stars in the sky twinkled and the moon glowed. Would of been perfect if they were going out. He lead her to the front door and she stood there looking at him.
Both: Good night
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| On November 20th 2007 iluvcountry90 Said : | |
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WoW! This is great! I love the format of the story! :) |
| On November 20th 2007 nickjonson Said : | |
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is this a script for a play, or are u just making it in that format to avoid using quotation marks and stuff? It's pretty good, tho. Just a few grammatical and spelling errors, but o well |
| On November 20th 2007 PrettyPistol89 Said : | |
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I love your story, it's very cute, but there re a few words missing some letters, just thought you should know. Overall, I like it!!! Can't wait to read more!!! |
| On November 20th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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awww its cute, keep me posted please!
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