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Creative Created on 3-29-08 Views(114) Story Rating G

The rain falls hard, drenching the two figures, boy and girl, facing eachother. The water only adds to the tremendous amount of tension between them.

"Why can't you be completely open with me? You know you can trust me. You know you can tell me anything." Ariana shouts at him, tears running down her face in frustration.

"I... its not you don't trust. It's me" Jacob says. She looks at him in confusion. His jaw twitches with the effort to stay away from her, but it is inevitable, just as the mystic predicts. He rushes over to her, grabs her, and kisses her softly before whispering "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry..." 

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On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia nicey
On April 2nd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 I LKE IT. KMP.
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On March 30th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
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On March 30th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp!!
On March 30th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen keep me posted please
On March 30th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 OoOo,Interesting!!KMP please =)
On March 30th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll You should continue. Kmupdated if you do~
On March 30th 2008 ChaseCooper432 Said :
ChaseCooper432 kmp plz
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On March 30th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany I love it.Kmp.
On March 29th 2008 avder Said :
avder I like it. KMP! Please check out my story She's My Hero!
On March 29th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 this sounds cool!kmp plzz!=]
On March 29th 2008 geli01 Said :
geli01 like it! I'm writing a story called bridesmaids and you should really check it out! One of the characters is named ariana too.