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Gun Mayhem[1]

Gun Mayhem[1]

Creative Created on 11-16-07 Views(116) Story Rating G

  John wasn't a normal boy. At age 8 he could wield a pistol, and at age 15 he sniped someone(headshot!!!). Despite his parents' effort to stop his 'unusual ability'(Mental doctors, persuation etc), he still continued to KILL.

  He is now aged 25, with a house full of rifles, pistols, sniper rifles, sub-machine guns and rocket lauchers. Of course, he had lots of ammutation. One particular day, he went out holding two 'second hand' pistols. He went to a drug store to 'pawn' those guns. As those are 'second hand' guns, John could only get $20 in cash. Grumbling, he went home. Wanting to get revenge(he's tempermental, by the way), he picked up his 2 prized uzi's, and went to the drug store.

  As John came back only for a short while, the counter guy reconised him and asked if he wanted to sell the two uzi's or what. His only reply is 'Bang!' and the guy's head exploded. Bits of brains flew in all directions. Some splatered onto John's face. He wiped them off. The rest of the staff took their weapons(uzi's, pistols, shotguns etc) and prepared to 'pawn' John. All of them opened fire at once. John was quick. He side-jumped, avoiding all the bullets while shooting his uzi's. Everything was in slow motion. John was shooting fast and accurate bullets while avoiding the surviving staffs' slow visible bullets. Soon, all the staffs were dead. Nobody else dared to stop him. He went to the cash register and took out all its money.

  Feeling quite good about himself, John decided to go for a drink. He went to the bar and with a devilish smile, he ordered a double. Pretty soon he was drunk. Suddenly, a huge shadow stood over him. 'Well, lookie here. What have we got?' Then, the figure dragged him to somewhere else.

  What will happen to John? Stay and wait for the next episode of 'Gun Mayhem'!

By Jordan aka Damn Your Ass

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On January 21st 2008 DamnYourAss Said :
DamnYourAss Well... what is the SOON for?
On January 20th 2008 ngsj33 Said :
ngsj33 jordan...u say u r going to make a second one...but after 1 month...ur second is not out yet.
On December 27th 2007 DamnYourAss Said :
DamnYourAss alright im gonna make a second one SOON.
On December 11th 2007 VxKArma Said :
VxKArma Well i know you hate critics but...you know most stories(good ones anyway) have teh main chgaracter getting hurt in some way during a fight or at least i think so. Interesting plot tho.
KARMA!
On November 16th 2007 DamnYourAss Said :
DamnYourAss Please vote or comment