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One look.

Creative Created on 6-9-08 Views(34) Story Rating G

Kimber stared across at Maggie.

Once her friends, almost weird and outside the bubble of highschool like her.

But no, the bubble had sucker her in, using its gripping tentalcles to take her.

Pulling and transforming her once bestfriend.

Transforming into a fake-bake dyed blond, with eating problems.

She munched angrily on her Garden Salsa Sun chips.

Kimber looked out the window, watching the rain pour down,

thinking about the miserable walk home.

Kimber rested her head agaisnt the side of the wall.

Why did she have to be so alone?

There he was, walking with his tray, he looked past her. \She caught his scent as he walked by.

That was Evan.

With his faded jeans, metallica t-shirt he grazed past her sitting with his friends.

No Sadee, she noticed.

Then Sadee walked past, with a face that completley read;

im making a scene.

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"So you just dump me huh?!" Sadee screams.

Evan couldnt take this, living was no longer effortless,

being alone was effortless.

He didnt know Sadee was so...

Attached.

Kimber turned, watching.

As far as she knew Evan didnt need this.

He seemed nice.

In that, stalker-ish way.

Evan rested his head on his arms, breathing in the scent of the Pine-sol of the table.

A hand thwacked his head, he curled his fists.

Dont hit her.

Dont hit her.

In this moment of rage, he wished his existance would end.

Kimber could see it radiate from him.

The way his fists clenched.

Sadee was still screaming, but she couldnt hear anything.

Evan looked up, and with his burning eyes; looked into her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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On June 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh why do you skip lines...it is stupid to do that and kmp i like the story