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the forgotten 6

Creative Created on 7-20-08 Views(147) Story Rating PG13

"Exucuse me?"

"Yeah. You heard me! Do I have to say it again?!"

"I thought we told you tht you WOULD NOT be seeing tht boy!"

"Yeah. You thought right. But ur orders are opinions and I thought tht that opinion was downright stupid."

"I am glad tht you are leaving this house young lady!"

"I am too. Don't you worry. And young lady? But I thought tht I was an adult? What happened to tht huh?"

"Just be quiet right this instant!!"

"Nah. I dont like tht opinion."

Her mom got up and smacked her across the face. Her hand had been wet with tears and tht made it hurt even more. Her mother had NEVER smacked her. Amanda turned her head towards her mother and saw the rage in her eyes. She smacked her once more. Amanda ran to her room, locked the door, and grabbed a packing bag from her closet. She got dressed, because she had still been in her towel. Then, she pulled her drawers open with such force she thought she was going to break them. She threw all of her clothes in her bag. It was full so she grabbed another. It was a suitcase this time. She put all of her perfumes and accessories in there. Along with her shoes. She had swiped her room almost clean. She grabbed her phone and put it in her purse. She then gathered all three things and opened her door. She stormed past the kitchen where her mom had been and went straight to the front door. She then put her shoes on and her mom came out of the kitchen...

 

 

 

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On July 23rd 2008 justlikeme1569 Said: 
justlikeme1569 she did deserve to get smacked but her parents shouldnt kick her out when i got pregnant at 17 my parents called me a few names and that was about it.
On July 22nd 2008 Angel2k11 Said: 
Angel2k11 sorry but she is making it worse for herself by being so disrespectful....she deserved the smack! gosh that girl...
On July 20th 2008 JasmineMCRmy Said: 
JasmineMCRmy wow kmpp
On July 20th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: 
hollistechik08 whoaaa dude. and pshhh yeah she kinda deserved that smackk. huh. and yeah i think her mom made a good decision.
On July 20th 2008 MizzKierra14 Said: 
MizzKierra14 plz kmp and write another chapter lolz
On July 20th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: 
yeaitzJess watch her mom be all sappy and tell her not to leave, but i think she should leave and live with someone else anyway. PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!!