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Mistakes ch.1

Drama Created on 1-20-08 Views(181) Story Rating G

        Hailey had nothing to do but sit in her room broken hearted. The boy of her dreams had just broken up with her after 3 years. She sat with her blonde hair knotted and messy in front of her face. She felt like she had completely ran out of tears and couldn't cry anymore. But just when she had stopped, they would just stream out her eyes.

Her mother Diane knocked on the door. "GO AWAY!" shouted Hailey. She had never talked to her mother like that. She just wasn't in the mood for any company. "What's wrong Hailey?!" She could hear anger in her mother's voice. "Just, come in."

Diane soflty opened the door to see her daughter on the floor against the wall. Her room was a complete mess and so was she. "Hailey! What's wrong?!" Her mother was more frightened than angry. "Mom, Dane broke up with me."

She could see her mother's face turn blank and it was silent for about 1 minute. Diane gazed around the room. She had NEVER seen Hailey like this. "Oh, come here my love." She put her arms out and reached for Hailey. Hailey started to cry once more as she lay in her mother's arms. Her mother absolutely adored Dane and didn't think they would ever break up. She was in as much shock as her daughter was.

After a little while, Diane left and told her she would be upstairs if she needed anything. Hailey searched around the room for her purse and finally found it. She took her cellphone out and started sharing the news to all of her friends. Of course, that's what like everybody does. Her friends were all in disbelief and shocked.

Now, Hailey was just plain angry. She had to get that little *** back for dumping her. She didn't even know why he did. Her and her friends didn't know what to do to get him back.  Rebecca said "Hey, doen't he play on the football team?" Hailey didn't even have to think. That's how well she knew him. "Well, yeah. Why?"

 

 

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On January 21st 2008 hollistechik08 Said: 
hollistechik08 wow lex, i lix it. alott haha lol keep it goin, ur a good riter sis, ilysm
On January 20th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: 
XxXkillinMeXxX .. Dane's a girls name!
On January 20th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: 
XxXkillinMeXxX kmp!!
On January 20th 2008 necrosiss Said: 
necrosiss interesting. i would prefer if you didn't refrain from the profanity, it adds emotion. But thats just my opinion. Others and you may be offended so do as you wish. :].
On January 20th 2008 XxBlessedxX Said: 
XxBlessedxX This is good so far:] Keep going.