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Hostage (12) the end
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The police drove everywhere. Maybe even more than 20 miles and still
they couldn't find anything. Charlotte couldn't remember which way she
went, because all she kept doing was turning, speeding, and going
anywhere she could see. After a couple days, the police finally found
the building but it was very abandoned. There was NOTHING in there.
Not even blood where she stabbed him. So the police had to put the
case aside, because they couldn't find him. And she was ok anyways.
A few weeks later as Charlotte totally forgot about it, there was a
knock at the door. Not suspecting anything, she opened the door only
to find that there was nobody there. She looked around and still there
was nobody. That was fine to her. She just thought it was a simple
ding-dong-ditch. Then, about 5 minutes aftee she closed the door,
there was another knock. She opened it to find no one there again.
A little later, came a ring from the door bell. Frustrated, she ripped the
door almost off the hinges ans screamed "WHAT?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
She looked down to see her pink Coach purse lying there on the floor.
She stared at it with big eyes for about 1 minute. She slowly reached
for the purse, carefull of her surroundings. She thought that he might
be out there. She threw it inside and closed the door. When she turned
around, there was Darko. With a gun in his hand. He lifted it up, and
pulled the trigger....
THE END!!!!!! I really hoped you guys liked it!!!!! I will be making another story soon. Hope to see you guys post and rate!! Thanx
Comments
| On August 2nd 2008 Taulha Said: |
| On August 2nd 2008 Taulha Said: |
| On July 24th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: |
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| i dont get why he took her in the first place???????? |
| On January 16th 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said: |
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| Haha, REVENGE! |
| On January 11th 2008 justlikeme1569 Said: |
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| what? Good story he did kill her right? |
| On January 11th 2008 dancerbabe16 Said: |
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| yikes! loved this story! =] |
| On January 11th 2008 makana96792 Said: |
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| omg, love it, let me know when you write a new story!!! |
| On January 10th 2008 lilangel1301 Said: |
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| wow!, I love it, when you get the secound one up tell me |
| On January 10th 2008 necrosiss Said: |
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| rofl. haha. nice. |


