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     Since my parents couldn't hear me I told Dan to tell them to listen, but he just said "They will just think I'm a crazy person". He was right, what was I thinking?I just forgot about it , and followed/flew  to Dan's locker where the new girl, Claudia was waiting for somebody." Oh hey, Claudia!" Dan said in his nervous tone." Hey, I was just wondering if,  we could hang out someday, this week?" "You know, to get to know each other, and so you can tell me about the school a little, since we have all the classes together." she finished, and winked.  "Sure" he said.I yelled yelled" nooooooooo" in his head, but he just ignored me.

I just ran/flew off to my house.I wasn't sure what to think at first, but then I came to a conclusion, I just can't have Dan. I stayed with my parents that night, I watched them cry, eat, and  sleep.The next day, I went to school.First period, I had science, I saw Dan, so I flew over to him and spoke, " Sorry that I over reacted yesterday, it's just that I thought you loved me, and seeing you talk to that girl so nervously made me worried." "It's all right, I accept your apology, and I still love you, but......" he paused, because Claudia came over, and then she leaned and.............

 

 

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On June 26th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 i like it kmp
On May 10th 2008 unknownwolfie Said :
unknownwolfie NICE!!!!! very tense; great job .. n that don couldnt even wait few days!!!!! HE Z SUCH A jerkk cheating on a dead girl right infront of her ... I would be FREAKED :P hurry up with more
On April 11th 2008 ganstalizzie91 Said :
ganstalizzie91 kmp
On April 9th 2008 hirschey11 Said :
hirschey11 love it love it kmp!