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After I Died

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Created on 1-17-08

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"Boom!!!"I heard the sound, but I didn't know what was happening, everything just went blank, I elt the pain, but it was quickly fading.

I didn't know what was happening, but I knew it wasn't good.I was confused... I woke up in a black room, which had nothing in it.I saw a light, far far away, but it was fading.I wanted to run, but I couldn't."NO!!"I screamed.Then I fell to my knees and cried, and cried, until I realized I was dead.I didn't believe it, but it was true, I just didn't know how to react. It didn't feel like a dreamed, but I was telling myself that it was.

I closed my eyes for a minute , then opened them, and I appeard in the hospital, I saw myself lying on the hospital bed. A bunch of doctors were trying to save me, I was still alive, but unconcious.I was releived, then suddenly the line just went straingt. " We lost her!She's dead!"One of the doctors screamed in a said voice. He said it like he knew me, and he looked so disapointed.

My life is over, I'm just a soul, and I don't know how much time I have left to hang around like this.

I'll try to do a better job on the next one, it's just my first time writing, just wanted to give it a try..

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On February 20th 2008 DefineEmo Said :

	Even though it was a first story, it has an interesting concept. ^^

On January 30th 2008 hirschey11 Said :

	this was good its a great idea!

On January 21st 2008 unknownwolfie Said :

	thts really kool ... I lov the idea! lemme go read more :D great job

On January 20th 2008 XxBlessedxX Said :

	Yea Yea Yea:] write more. this is majorly intersting! If you write more, tell me. I wanna read the rest:] Oh and please read and comment my storys. Tell me your honest opion :] Much love, Alex

On January 18th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :

	I f u want me to write this story plz say so, thank u.

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